Oh my god what the heck did you do with my story!??? =O It sounds so much better and less confusing. I really can't word things properly sometimes. Thanks for editing but just one thing: some of it is in present tense and some's in past tense. Thanks again! :D
HEY CHICA I'M IN AN AWESOME MOOD SO I FELT LIKE MESSAGING YOU ON THIS WISHING YOU GOOD LUCK ON YOUR BIG EXAM (EVEN THOUGH YOUR TEACHER IS A DOUCHE MONKEY!) I JUST DRANK A TON OF HOT CHOCOLATE SO I'M SUPER HYPER AND OH MY GOD! SUPERNATURAL IS ON RIGHT NOW AND I TOTALLY FORGOT!!!! TALK TO YOU LATER I GOTTA GO WATCH DEAN!!!!
Thank you for your comment (even though I've just recently realized how *eh* my story is. I'm writing an updated version of it soon though)! It means alot!!
Hey, you commented on my story, I'll tell him you're a hero. Just wanted to tell you it's been edited and it's hopefully better. Could you please read it again to see if anything else need changing ? Thanks Jodie
Oh my God your 20! Officially an old lady ha ha. I found this story called save me from the falling sky mysteriously in my inbox. It's pretty good and original with minimal grammer error (that I can see) and the facts seem mainly right except for a few but it's not horrible. Here's the link: http://stories.mibba.com/read/309653/Save-Me-From-The-Falling-Sky/