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First of all, oh my god, i'm so excited you left that comment. It totally blows me away that you put thought into something I wrote because I think the majority of my writing is shit and nobody cares about it, so thank you so much!

I really liked your critique and I definitely agree with the things you said. When I started writing this i'd planned for Alyssa to have a bigger role but she kind of got lost in the middle, which I wish I wouldn't have let happen but eh, too late now. But yes, Emilia kind of led him on and then ended up ruining a potentially really good thing because she was scared.

Honestly, I just sat down and wrote. I didn't outline the story or anything, which is probably why it ended so weird. But ahhhh, i'm still so excited you critiqued it. :)

Well, Larry Stylinson is very educational, and way better than homework.
Thank you so much for reading my story, really. It's massively appreciated.
I'll be posting some more soon. :)

Let me just say, I love you so much for your comment. It means a ton! I'm so happy you like it. I wasn't sure if anyone would read it. I will write more soon. Massive thank you. xx

Thank you for the comment! I absolutely love writing Olivia and Harry :)

Really? I just love your story! I get really excited when I see it's been updated. Thanks for your comment on my page! :)

:D thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you like it. (:

Wow. Oh my gosh.
I so appreciate your comment. Like, lately, any sort of feedback has been very minimal. Even on the stories that have a lot more readers, and when I do get something, it usually just, 'good update!' or 'he's a dick!', you know?

But you're comment was awesome. Not only did you actually take the time to really tell me what you liked, but you also made me kind of rethink the direction I was going with the story originally. I was trying to rush to the end of the story and your comment made me think like, 'yeah, Jordan does have more restraint that that.'

So, thank you so much for helping me to realize that I was about to make a mistake I'd regret writing in the story. I'm so happy you actually like the story enough to save them so you can reread it later. Really, this was one of the best comments I've ever received. Thank you, thank you, thank you. :)

Thanks for the comment :)

Ah, thanks for noticing my mistake! I fixed it. :) Thanks for reading and commenting, too.

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D: You were not welcomed. WELCOME TO MIBBA.