Thanks for the comments. I think "When Humanity Falls" is a little hard to understand unless you know about my story "Railway in the Sky." I tend to write poems that connect with my stories.
Can you do me a favor, I have this amazing friend (her links at the bottom of my about stuff) and her life is ruff but her writing is amazing, may you please just check it out and maybe leave a Comment on her page or something, It would mean a lot to her and to me, she really needs the support, because she is breaking and her writing is like her only escape