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  • MadolcheMisu

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    Lol, thank you! I'm so excited to read it! Also, it's really no problem. I love reading it and I like to comment on what I enjoy reading :) You could honestly write 50 chapters for this and I would probably read them all. haha.
    August 16th, 2012 at 02:41am
  • alonginginmybones

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    You're so welcome! =) I'll definitely check out your other story! Cool
    August 16th, 2012 at 02:40am
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    Oh, good god is he FUCKING SEXY! Excuse me while I drool...
    August 10th, 2012 at 02:45am
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    Awesome! I'm excited for the next Chapter :) I like that she's not super whiny or anything. Glad to know she'll stay that way. You're doing a great job!
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:59pm
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    ur in luck doll. I'll be posting a new chapter which i'm sure you'll like in about five minutes so be on the look out for it. Thanx so much for the comment. I'll glad u like the story.
    July 31st, 2012 at 05:33pm
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    Was I the first to pick on the summary, but probably not the last, since any and every detail that stick out, is sure to be picked at.
    These also stick out, I doubt there are any rules agains them, just that I feel they should be more serious, which may be my opinion, or a more general 1?

    Since it's your story, it's yours to do with, as you please. Just like it's up to me to comment on it, when I got this with the swap.
    I doubt there are any rules on how to name chapters, more then possibly the decorative, and more general one.

    I try not to be judgemental*giggles* though I suppose I may fail on occasion. With the swap, I read a chapter, and comment on it.

    Best of luck with the story.
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:55pm
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    thank you thank you aoerijeokfdoae
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:53am
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    Thank you so much for the comment on Shattered Truth! You're too sweet :)
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:31am
  • I Feel Like Koda

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    :3 Thank you so much for the comment! It means a lot
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:27am
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    in reference to your comment on Invincible ...

    C'MERE. LET ME LOVE YOU. ♥
    July 24th, 2012 at 06:29am
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    Awwww! I nearly cried when I read your comment. That's by far the nicest, sweetest comment I've ever gotten. Ever. Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. Though it was a one-shot, I'm thinking of making a sequel to it to carry on with Carmen's story. If I do, you'll be the first to know. -A
    July 22nd, 2012 at 01:39am
  • hidans_hoe

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    Oh okay. I prolly should have read the first chapter. I just got so confused. Haha. Sorry.
    July 21st, 2012 at 07:06am
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    July 20th, 2012 at 02:56am
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    July 20th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • INACTIVExx

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    Hey!! Thanks a lot for your comment on Krovi :B I really appreciate it and am glad u liked :) I actually just updated a new chapter so you know :P and also, my name is rebecca as well!! :B hahahaha thanks again and peace out :D
    July 20th, 2012 at 02:07am
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    thank you for the comment on east avenue! i'm glad you liked it
    July 17th, 2012 at 09:58pm
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    Thanks! Hope you like the next two chapters, too.
    July 17th, 2012 at 06:41pm
  • Cupcake Violence

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    Nooooow everything makes sense ages arn't that weird now :P I'm definitively judging it, but only as a good story :P think i recommended and subscribed soo :P
    June 27th, 2012 at 11:49pm
  • n. josten

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    I'm so happy you like it! I double checked for anything that was messed up and there's nothing, so you can remove me as an author now because I can't do it myself. I'm really, really glad you like it. (:

    Ah, maybe, but I like to avoid that...unbearably cliche stories, which I'm afraid if what will happen if I attempt a sequel because of how it's going to end. I would hate to write a cliche story when I constantly rant about how I can hardly stand them because it's like reading the same book over and over. But maybe so!
    June 10th, 2012 at 08:35am
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    Alright. I had to make the story as my own to get a good feel for it buuut.
    Is there anything you want changed here before I set it as your layout on the main story? (:

    Yeah...that sounds exactly like my story right now, except I know that's how I'm going to end it, no changes. It leaves a lot of doors open for a sequel but unless I have a good, less-than-cliche plot to write to it, I won't so it'll stay the way it'll end. My readers are going to hate me. N'aw.
    But I'm really looking forward to it then!
    June 10th, 2012 at 08:16am