Thanks for the tip! :) I'll remember the italics next time I need to flashback. I won't stop writing this any time soon, it's just a slow process because of school work. You comments and advice is very much appreciated!!
Thank you so much for your comment! I will change to color of the font so it's easier to read. Lol. THank you for subscribing!! <3 I'll be posting more today!
That makes me happy. I like it that reader's become inspired with the messed up stories that I write. :)
And I will, I just don't know when. I've started school this week, and so far I have a shit tone of homework, and I still have one more class to go to. But I will check out your story. It'll probably be either tomorrow night, or Friday night, depending on my availability. :)
Oh thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed the first draft. :)
How I'm doing it is having readers give me their email and I email what I have done so far. So, if you're still interested, just inbox me your email, and I'll forward what I have done so far. I'm currently halfway through rewriting chapter five.
As for your question, no, it really didn't. I know I may sound like I'm heartless, but it didn't. I had it planned out way before I ended the story, so it didn't really feeling any different. In all honesty, I was actually somewhat happy to kill one of the main characters off because I wanted to see the readers reactions.
Don't worry about it being late to comment, I love seeing new comments from readers, so don't worry about. It doesn't matter what story it's on, it just makes me happy when readers give me their opinions.
That's what I was hoping for when I wrote that ending, and with the rewriting that I'm planning to do with the story, I'm actually planning to make it more emotional.
Thanks for the comment on my story! That's pretty cool. The Eric in my story is a mix between two Erics I know. One is spelled "Erik" and the other is "Eric" They are both my best friends, but Eric is the one that I really am using as this character. Nonetheless, thank you for your comment.