Hi Kellz :)
So sorry it's been so long :/ And yes I just ignore people that decide they're going to ignore me, it wastes my time anyway and I've learned that someone who wastes your time isn't worth your time. And lol we've all tweeted celebrities O_o :)
Exactly! I mean, I don't care if people don't like me, I just don't like it when they pretend to like me. Like they think that talking to me and then ignoring me will hurt my feelings less than just saying " I don't really want to talk to you" will. Someone on mibba's doing that to me and to be honest I'm pretty upset about it >.>
sorry It took me so damn long to respond >.< my idea was, you have those whores that are trying to get Monte, mybe you could make it that like, they all used to know Harley and them trying to get Monte is more personally meant against her....idk, just a thought.
I like your story a lot in a sense I may be obsessed ;) erm i have an idea for your story are you open to outside ideas? Lemme know if you want to hear it...
flattered? darlin, im the flattered one xD haha. [i use pet names on everrone, hope it isnt creepy haha...bad habit...>.>] your comment was really helpful, i hadnt quite realized the lack of description of Amber. i will definitely address that in my next chapter 8D
however, what you said about explaining amber's dads past... you know, i definitely see where youre coming from, and with any other story, i would forsure do that, but... in this case, it's hard for me to sympathize with this man. it's hard for me to empathize and create a background for his character that explains his tendency to abuse. i only say that because... well, i mean... i just know someone thats like him, that i based him off of. they say all the same things and do all the same things and would react the same ways. he's real, and that person has no reason to do what they do... i just dont think i can give him an excuse...