okay just finished reading it!!
okay not bad few spelling mistakes but it happens ya know!
umm u sometimes us simpler words like mad and stuff like that try not to us those unless you have to ya know?
you also say man whore and whore alot try switchin up some insults lol!
u seem to be on a good track good story line characters.....
do u plan on progressing your character sky do u see her anger and drinking getting worse or better her and justin just hooking up or settling down?? think about where u want here to go in the end as a character!
~lu (: