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  • pillowsnfeathers17

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    Thanks for your super duper comment! I'm glad you like my story :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:40pm
  • sharkbait.

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    You're welcome! Glad I could help. ◠◡◠
    June 8th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • sharkbait.

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    You're welcome for the comment. In order to do italics, you need to use bbcode. So, you use this:[i*]the part you want to be italicized[/i*]. In order for it to work, you need to erase the *s. With it finished, it should look like: the part you want to be italicized.

    I hope this helps!
    June 8th, 2012 at 09:44pm
  • WithMyFriends

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    Thank you for the comment :) I really take that to heart and I try and fix the POV switching as the sequels continue :)
    June 8th, 2012 at 06:19am
  • birdbones

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    Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me. I am actually almost done writing the second chapter, which will certainly take the story in a completely different direction. Hopefully you guys will like it!
    June 7th, 2012 at 11:02pm
  • ShanaeNayy

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    No problem!
    June 7th, 2012 at 09:45pm
  • YourForeignGrandma

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    Thank you for commenting on "Emily and Sierra and Their Many Worlds of Terror." My co-author and I are glad you liked it.
    I do agree with you on the font. We haven't updated the story in about a year so it maybe time to change the layout a little as well.
    I really appreciate the feedback.
    June 6th, 2012 at 03:09am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Now that you mention it, it kind of does. Thank you so much for your help! (:
    June 6th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    I liked your suggestions and I tried to stick to them but I didn't particularly like the orange so instead I went for a lighter pink and darkened the blue a bit. Could you tell me what you think, please? I appreciate your thoughts. (:
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:53am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Thank you for your comment on "Down Into The Lake," I greatly appreciate the criticism. About the layout, I find it's a little hard on the eyes too, but every color I try to change it to to make it a little better on the eyes, it seems to make it either harder or just doesn't do anything. If you have any suggestions, could you tell me?

    About how it should be separated into a few chapters, I agree. It use to be but when I got down to writing the continuing chapters, I realized having three chapters before it didn't really appeal to me. However, it might be better as a few chapters but I really can't decide.

    Again, thank you for your criticism. (:
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:34am
  • LivE.LiFe.RanDoM

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    I think that makes it even more interesting though. Even though she doesn't like someone doesn't mean she doesn't notice them or observe them. You can hate someone and still know they have this annoying habit because while you're busy glaring at them and you subconsciously notice they... scratch their ears every five seconds.
    And as for the blindfolding, description doesn't have to mean visual. Explore the sounds and smells. It all just gives the reader more to imagine.
    June 6th, 2012 at 01:12am
  • paracosm.

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    :) Thank you again.
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:38pm
  • paracosm.

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    Thank you for commenting on my story! Your comment was really lovely :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 09:23pm
  • NoRaindropsOnRoses

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    Give me a hug Becca...
    HUGGING.
    March 26th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    Yup, I made Pete caring for a change! Next chapter will be from one of the three boys :)
    March 4th, 2012 at 06:35pm
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    Thanks again for the comment, I was hoping people would want to see a sequel.
    February 28th, 2012 at 10:55pm
  • i_am_dead_on_arrival

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    Thanks for the comment of Cries of a Love Bat…I'm going to clear things up in the next chapter!
    February 21st, 2012 at 05:47pm
  • Miss Tiffany Blews

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    I have completely forgotten that story. I probably won't write it, but if I do I might rewrite it. I'll probably do it over the summer or something because of school
    February 18th, 2012 at 06:59pm
  • SingingSinner

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    before i reply let me just say your profile is the shit! *legit*
    but anyways no problem i love commenting on stories b/c quite frankly the authors deserve it and i love you guys's story i cant wait for more im definitely interested :)
    January 19th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • NoRaindropsOnRoses

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    The whole roses thing is more like...I'm not sure, exactly. I feel like they can describe emotions quite well sometimes. But thank you!
    December 19th, 2011 at 12:06am