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Thank you so much for your comment, it means a lot to me. I am actually almost done writing the second chapter, which will certainly take the story in a completely different direction. Hopefully you guys will like it!
Thank you for commenting on "Emily and Sierra and Their Many Worlds of Terror." My co-author and I are glad you liked it. I do agree with you on the font. We haven't updated the story in about a year so it maybe time to change the layout a little as well. I really appreciate the feedback.
I liked your suggestions and I tried to stick to them but I didn't particularly like the orange so instead I went for a lighter pink and darkened the blue a bit. Could you tell me what you think, please? I appreciate your thoughts. (:
Thank you for your comment on "Down Into The Lake," I greatly appreciate the criticism. About the layout, I find it's a little hard on the eyes too, but every color I try to change it to to make it a little better on the eyes, it seems to make it either harder or just doesn't do anything. If you have any suggestions, could you tell me?
About how it should be separated into a few chapters, I agree. It use to be but when I got down to writing the continuing chapters, I realized having three chapters before it didn't really appeal to me. However, it might be better as a few chapters but I really can't decide.
I think that makes it even more interesting though. Even though she doesn't like someone doesn't mean she doesn't notice them or observe them. You can hate someone and still know they have this annoying habit because while you're busy glaring at them and you subconsciously notice they... scratch their ears every five seconds. And as for the blindfolding, description doesn't have to mean visual. Explore the sounds and smells. It all just gives the reader more to imagine.
I have completely forgotten that story. I probably won't write it, but if I do I might rewrite it. I'll probably do it over the summer or something because of school
before i reply let me just say your profile is the shit! *legit*
but anyways no problem i love commenting on stories b/c quite frankly the authors deserve it and i love you guys's story i cant wait for more im definitely interested :)