Thanks! AHHA! :))
Just so you know, that poem was just a joke at first! AHHA. :D
I did it to amuse my friend, and I didn't think that it would get comments.
http://member.mibba.com/226646/
I think she can help you. Well, I never actually tried working with her, or asking her for help, but, she offered to proof-read my stories and stuff. :)
Why don't you ask her! :D