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  • Ultraviolet Light

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    thanks for the comment! lol i know poor Kaner!
    July 21st, 2011 at 08:46pm
  • Jayla1231

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    LOL ur welcome. I fell bad for Raina too. My next story is bringing back her POV, Especially with her BFF Max in town.
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • Hannahdoll

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    lol
    you're very welcome.
    I try to comment on anything I read even if it's a small comment.
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    July 19th, 2011 at 11:51pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    No problem. :) Each chapter deserves its own comment. I know, as a writer, I like feedback for each one, so I return the favor, especially on stories that I like a lot.

    -kayt
    July 19th, 2011 at 11:42pm
  • mirasin

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    But all I've been hearing about the captaincy since Langenbrunner's been traded has been "blah, blah, blah, Parise is god's gift to hockey and so he should be captain regardless of his mega irresponsibility," but I agree with you. I think Elias should be captain. Or White.
    July 18th, 2011 at 07:08am
  • Hannahdoll

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    You're very welcome.
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    July 18th, 2011 at 05:37am
  • sharpedo

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    I hated the last part of it. I think it's 'cause I've been writing allot of other things so my mind was elsewhere. But thank you!
    July 18th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • simplymexx

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    Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you love it! Unfortunately, though, I'm not planning a sequel for the story. It's supposed to be a light, fluffy piece and I think a sequel would make it too serious. Plus, I already have to the Epilogue planned in my head and I just really like how I'm going to end it. But, I will be doing another story (including my fictional hockey one and my Mike Richards one) after I get done contest entries :)
    July 17th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • sharpedo

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    That's why I had to put it in again! It's one of the most important details in the story. And the details is what I want people to pay attention to, haha. I won't say no more, I'm not gonna give anything away!
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • sharpedo

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    Thank you for being the only one who's ever commented on the quitting hockey thing!!
    July 16th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • Jayla1231

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    U know I couldnt let Max wait too long, unrealistic
    July 16th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • iheartstaal11

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    I thought you might like the little fluff moment between Haley and Sid. :)
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • AliNicTem

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    Hey guys! Okay so heres the deal its only 5 more days until the dead line!!! But if you talk to me soon about needing more time! I will gladly be nice and give yea some more days!! just let me know soon! I cant wait to read every ones!!!!!


    http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/166341/1/
    July 14th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • sharpedo

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    I don't even know where it came from, it just came to me.
    Oh jeez, that's a good one! Aw, thanks, I'll try my hardest. :)
    and thank you! I completely agree. What's your favourite movie and favourite character? Mine is number five and Petrie is my favourite character. :)
    July 13th, 2011 at 09:01pm
  • sharpedo

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    I think "KFC drive through" might be the most genius thing I've ever came up with.
    :O You don't like Viola?! That wasn't supposed to happen.. I'm not mad, though. I'm kind of glad. I have some work to do, I guess. I gotta make you like her.
    I made Max like this because he's been pretty calm this year, don't you think? Maybe it's just cause he turned 27. I don't know.
    Thanks for commenting, made my day! <3
    July 13th, 2011 at 08:22am
  • Jayla1231

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    Its def. been a learning experience. I never liked to write, only read. Its funny when I look back on my Danny story how my writing got better throughout. Starting to get the hang of it.
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:56am
  • Jayla1231

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    LOL just sent u a message, I love wrapping them all together. My chicago one is the only one that isnt- and I did that for a challenge to myself, lol
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:39am
  • Jayla1231

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    Ha, ya know. Bad Max
    July 11th, 2011 at 02:12am
  • Jayla1231

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    Love Max, but I determined to make him celibate
    July 11th, 2011 at 01:58am
  • iheartstaal11

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    I'm torn between Marc, Jordan and Jared. I love Eric, but he's married so that is an automatic no no for me, I still love him to pieces and he's an amazing hockey player but sadly he's married. :(
    July 11th, 2011 at 12:13am