No problem. :) Each chapter deserves its own comment. I know, as a writer, I like feedback for each one, so I return the favor, especially on stories that I like a lot.
But all I've been hearing about the captaincy since Langenbrunner's been traded has been "blah, blah, blah, Parise is god's gift to hockey and so he should be captain regardless of his mega irresponsibility," but I agree with you. I think Elias should be captain. Or White.
Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you love it! Unfortunately, though, I'm not planning a sequel for the story. It's supposed to be a light, fluffy piece and I think a sequel would make it too serious. Plus, I already have to the Epilogue planned in my head and I just really like how I'm going to end it. But, I will be doing another story (including my fictional hockey one and my Mike Richards one) after I get done contest entries :)
That's why I had to put it in again! It's one of the most important details in the story. And the details is what I want people to pay attention to, haha. I won't say no more, I'm not gonna give anything away!
Hey guys! Okay so heres the deal its only 5 more days until the dead line!!! But if you talk to me soon about needing more time! I will gladly be nice and give yea some more days!! just let me know soon! I cant wait to read every ones!!!!!
I don't even know where it came from, it just came to me.
Oh jeez, that's a good one! Aw, thanks, I'll try my hardest. :)
and thank you! I completely agree. What's your favourite movie and favourite character? Mine is number five and Petrie is my favourite character. :)
I think "KFC drive through" might be the most genius thing I've ever came up with.
:O You don't like Viola?! That wasn't supposed to happen.. I'm not mad, though. I'm kind of glad. I have some work to do, I guess. I gotta make you like her.
I made Max like this because he's been pretty calm this year, don't you think? Maybe it's just cause he turned 27. I don't know.
Thanks for commenting, made my day! <3
Its def. been a learning experience. I never liked to write, only read. Its funny when I look back on my Danny story how my writing got better throughout. Starting to get the hang of it.
I'm torn between Marc, Jordan and Jared. I love Eric, but he's married so that is an automatic no no for me, I still love him to pieces and he's an amazing hockey player but sadly he's married. :(