Hahahahahaha my best friend used to tell me to get in the kitchen and make him a sammich. Then he'd be like, wait why are you out of the kitchen in the first place?!
I wanna get a story started and I have so many ideas but I hardly find time between school and work. Not to mention, I always get sidetracked when I try writing.
With lets burn this city down? Maybe a little with the relationship happening within the first three chapters but who knows what your gonna do. I think it has a lot of potential and if you want it to be a long story I would suggest slowing it down a tiny bit.