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  • Onychophagia

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    If you would have checked your grammar, spelling, all that great stuff. If you would have made it flow so much better, elongated it, put more relevant, fabulous details in it.

    In other words, great plot, but I disliked how you executed it immensely.
    June 6th, 2011 at 02:08am
  • Rainbow_Smiles

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    You're very welcome! It's a really good story so keep it up!;)
    June 5th, 2011 at 11:57am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    D: Oh shit and I may post it up tonight depends
    June 1st, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • Sucks For You

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    Haha, Im writing a new chapter now. :)
    June 1st, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • Sucks For You

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    Haha, thank you for the story comment. :)
    I'll probably have the second chapter up later today. :3
    May 31st, 2011 at 02:06pm
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