KrystinaKaotic / Comments

Oh pish posh. Wanna know how I write? I either think of, or have somebody else think of, ONE DRAMATIC PHRASE. I unfold an entire song/poem from that phrase. My song Dead Angel? A fat guy told me he was gonna "rip open my ribs". I made an entire song from that.

Your poetry is pretty good. Structure needs a little work, content needs work, but expression is great.
Try expanding on some of the ideas in your poetry, rather than just saying it once and then writing a new line.
ie: if you write: "roses are red"
instead of next writing "violets are blue"
Try writing something that describes the previous line dramatically like:
"as the lips of the dead"
Roses are red
As the lips of the dead
will be more poetic than
Roses are red
Violets are blue
c: Just a little lesson for ya. Idk if you care what I have to say, but I like to help other people expand their knowledge and skill when I can. <3

thank you hun. I love your hair.

Awh XD
That sucks! :P
I know a little Korean
Fluent in Japanese cause I lived out in Japan for 5 years :L !

Oh. my. God.
dangsin-eun hangug-eo e yuchang ibnikka?

WILL DO! :D
eeeeeeeeeeeee<3

i read Fallen Angel and it was touching i admire the way you relate each passage(paragraph? idk whatever the fuck its called)to one another i wish could do that so well. your poetry is very much freestyle and thats the only kind i like so good job A for effort!

thank you for your comment on my poem i'm touched that people enjoy what i do this much:)

i might be able to help ya out but i won't promise anything because i'm not perfect so i don't know if what i'll say will be the kind of feedback you want.

lol gotta love a sense of humor :)

thats very true i know a lot of lying whores glad to say i don't know one more :)

i like your about paragraph you're not trying to convince people of anything good job for being fuck i hate liars.

Thank you for the comment :)

Welcome to mibba! I'm Caitie :D

Yeah, that sounds like a pretty good idea! XD

Ufortunately, I have no boyfriend or computer nerd friends, so I can't steal that idea. Ah, well, I guess I'll just live with the layout I have now. =/

I've thought about trying, too, but it seems pretty difficult to me, what with all the codes and everything.

But who knows, maybe it's easier than it looks. Either way, good luck! :)

That sounds cool! :)

I would, too, but I don't exactly know how. :(

Welcome. New Gerard Way story. Catch it from the beginning. http://stories.mibba.com/read/387354/Running-from-Lions/

You're welcome! :)
And, hey! We have the same profile layout! that's kinda awesome! ^-^

youre welcome!

how are you??

Welcome to Mibba (: