April 1st, 2012 at 04:39pm
debra morgan / Comments
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You're Welcome! It was more than deserving! :DMarch 24th, 2012 at 06:16pm
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Hi! I just wanted to let you know that I wrote an official review for Mibba Magazine about your Story The Fisherman's Daughter! :D It's a great story and I hope you keep writing it!March 23rd, 2012 at 02:01am
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thank you for the story comment (:March 21st, 2012 at 09:41pm
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Well I'm excited to know what you think of it :)March 21st, 2012 at 04:17am
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Yeah, I like to put twists in stories, whether it's right from the start or at the end or both. But I'm proud of Suffering Souls. I think it turned out well.
http://stories.mibba.com/read/351747/Suffering-Souls/March 21st, 2012 at 02:58am -
That is more than ok :) I enjoyed reading so much, so the least I can do is comment and say that and some pointers..... You know, that and the fact I have to for the contest.... But it didn't feel like a chore :)
And for your comment on my entry, thank you as well :) I have another story, just 3 chapters, called Suffering Souls, about Ville and it's even creepier than that lol I like making him psycho and the woman not interested, it's just so easy to do with him, for some reason.... But I can't believe you haven't read any other stories with him like that.....
I'm also glad the paragraphs were just the right length. I had a feeling some might be too long, but if I cut anything out or spaced it differently, I had a feeling things wouldn't flow correctly....
And for the ending, that's a good idea that I obviously didn't think of doing lol so let's just say that I just wanted the reader to imagine what he felt....March 21st, 2012 at 01:26am -
Thanks for the comment on my journal :)
I think I am gonna post, I've only got the first chapter upto yet, but I'm in a writing mood so hopefully I'll get more later.
When I first came on mibba it was crazy on here, now it's kinda slow... but things go like that, I think it'll pick up again soon when people aren't busy with like school and college and stuff.. Well I hope :)March 21st, 2012 at 12:30am -
Thanks, I appreciate the insight (:
And yea it really is my journal,
and I am thinking about keeping
it going, but there probably won't be
an update everyday...March 20th, 2012 at 02:58pm -
me either LOLOLOL.
i guess we should just.. encourage people to be more active and do the same ourselves??March 19th, 2012 at 04:14am -
do you really wanna do this? :DMarch 19th, 2012 at 01:20am
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CAN I GLOMP YOU?! Aha, sorry for the extreme weirdness. It's my way of saying THANK YOU VERY VERY MUCH FOR COMMENTING SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT ON MY STORY. Yes, I agree with you that people can easily use the dictionary for the parenthesised words, but I thought it might break the flow of the story somehow, and I can't really do much now to change the story because the contest I entered is past the due date. But I really appreciate your opinion! Really, I do. (( : It shows me that people like you actually care about the story. Thanks so much again (( :March 18th, 2012 at 10:52pm
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Thank you so much for the comments on my stories! XD It was much appreciated!March 18th, 2012 at 05:41pm
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You're very welcome! Sorry it took me so long! :DMarch 18th, 2012 at 07:00am
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you're welcome
and aha, I know, MM = <3
and alrightie lovie c:March 18th, 2012 at 06:28am -
No problem.
And thank you ^-^March 18th, 2012 at 06:23am -
You're very welcome (( :March 18th, 2012 at 04:23am
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Yeah, he most definitely was.
~ReenaMarch 18th, 2012 at 01:26am -
Thank you for the story comment, I appreciate it :)March 17th, 2012 at 12:48am
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What i absolutely love about say anything is that you start one of their songs and by the end of it it's almost like you're listening to a completely different song. you know what i mean? like when you listen to 'admit it!!!'March 16th, 2012 at 10:55pm
http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/173688/1/