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  • lilynotlyla

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    Thanks so much for your comment on Ashes and Wine! I'm so glad that you like it so far!
    July 11th, 2014 at 02:58am
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    Thank you so much for your comment on Someone Somewhere! I am so glad that you liked it!
    April 8th, 2014 at 04:30am
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    My professor thinks the "peace be with you" doesn't mesh well, but I'd really like to find a way to keep it in there.
    October 30th, 2013 at 01:51pm
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    Thanks for the kind things you said about the ending of Call It Off. It was really important to me to make the story as realistic as it could be. Life isn't fair and it definitely doesn't always work how we would it to. I'm glad I was able to portray that in the story. Time spent apart from each other may just modify the needs and wants of Ben and Delia. Thank you for reading!
    October 21st, 2013 at 08:17am
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    Thank you so much for the comment on Call It Off! And thanks for reading the story. One of my goals is to make readers feel with the characters and it's so rewarding when I hear back that I've done it effectively.
    October 17th, 2013 at 03:02am
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    aww, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I just updated it! :) thanks again for always reading and commenting! <3
    October 6th, 2013 at 01:29am
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    thanks so much for commenting on my story! I try to be as realistic as I can, and I'm glad you get the point I'm trying to make. I hope you enjoy the new update! :)
    September 28th, 2013 at 01:52am
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    I'm glad to get it updated too! I honestly love writing this story, it's a blast. And I'm very glad you're enjoying the ride too. Thanks for the lovely comment! :)

    I think it could be quite the doozy when he decides to head back to Pittsburgh, eh?
    July 30th, 2013 at 11:35pm
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    thanks so much for the comment on open your eyes!
    May 29th, 2013 at 06:32am
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    Not going to lie...it is one of my goals to make readers love Ben in this story. Thanks for the comment!
    May 25th, 2013 at 11:13am
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    Originally I started writing it when Rick was a free agent and I had him go to Chicago since it's where I live and know how to write it. At the end I was sort of thinking the same way with the NY thing. Maybe since I love Erin so much I'll have to finish her story there.

    I am SO glad you liked it! Even though it wasn't really a love shot, so I'm seriously happy you don't hate it.
    April 26th, 2013 at 06:25am
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    It's a miracle, but I've posted your one shot.

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/471122/The-Loyalty-Complex/
    April 26th, 2013 at 05:37am
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    You always know how to brighten my day with your comments! :) Thank you. I don't think very many people like Ben. Knowing that I've sucked someone into a Ben story is a great feeling. This is already my favorite hockey story that I've written so far. Thanks for reading! The next chapter should be up next weekend.
    April 21st, 2013 at 06:57pm
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    Thank you for the comment on Keep the Lights On, I'm glad you enjoyed the update :)

    And I think we would all like to be hunted down by a drunk James Neal haha <3
    April 14th, 2013 at 06:34am
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    For the record, the oneshot I owe you is sitting in my drafts folder. It needs to be edited and is lacking a conclusion, but I most definitely did not forget :)
    April 14th, 2013 at 06:28am
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    Thanks for the sweet comment! I think the ending is cute, and it's nice to see that other people like it too. I'm excited to share the new story and am glad you'll be reading. :)
    March 26th, 2013 at 05:27am
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    I'm like, bazillion years late, but I wanna thank you for reading my story and commenting it! I'm really glad you like it, and I hope you keep on reading it :)))

    thanks for commenting <3
    March 19th, 2013 at 11:15pm
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    Hard at work to get the next chapter with Kaylie and Luke's conversation up as soon as possible. Sorry for the wait. I'm really obsessive about editing. I just don't want to post something that I can't be proud of. Thank you for commenting!
    March 11th, 2013 at 08:09am
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    Thanks so much for commenting and recommending Shell Games. I know this sounds mean, because she's a character in my own story, but from the writing side, it's so easy to torture Kaylie. So I'm proud of her, too, for not letting Kris push her buttons anymore. This weekend's update will be up shortly and there's a surprise! I look forward to hearing what you think! :)
    March 4th, 2013 at 01:25am
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    Sometimes I wonder what's the bigger challenge: the actual writing part or the editing of the writing. So I'm glad you like my writing. :) And thank you for your excitement! I'm really excited to share the upcoming chapters all the way until the end. Stay tuned for this weekend's update - it's a big one.

    As for Luke and yoga, I've seen the video a couple of times in the last few years and no matter what I melt into a fit of giggles when they do the bridge. If I'm watching a game that he's a part of and the analysts talk about him, while there's a close up of him, I think of the video then, too. Very mature of me.

    Thanks for the comment!
    February 5th, 2013 at 04:37am