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Updated fairy frerard finally

Oh I'm sorry. You were a very good writer. I hope you get out of writers block soon. Xo

In reply to your comment- maybe.... ;)

Thank you so much for not being a silent reader! :)
I'm trying very hard not to make her a Mary-Sue. I'm hoping to be all updated in the next few days.

Geez you're good. But I'm not telling you otherwise ;) Ha. Thanks for the comment on Spreading Roots!

Ok, gotcha :) I was just confused. I know it does that on a lot of other layouts I've seen too. I think it's the screen size sometimes. I'm not sure if there was anything I could do to fix that though.

Um, quick question. What did you mean by the profile was hard to read th story. I'm confused. Was it the font color, what? Cause I'm just curious and wanted to know. It just stumped me since I could read it fine, but whatever it was wrong with the layout me know other than saying you couldn't read it because of the layout.

Wow um… Okay. I appreciate the feedback. Sorry my story was so terrible that you couldn’t make it past the third chapter. I honestly don’t think much about “Mary-Sue’s” when I’m writing. I didn’t put the story up to win a noble peace prize or get on the international best sellers list. I write for fun, for myself ONLY and I put the story up because I spent a good few years of my life writing it and 400+ pages later I didn’t want it to sit on my computer and collect dust. Yes, in the beginning I think my characters and the plotline is lacking. I started writing that story in 2006. It was one of the first stories I wrote. EVER. So yeah, there is going to be a development of style, ability and character growth throughout the story. In fact the title comes from a joke to myself about how terrible my plots were in the beginning. Which I explained later on, if you had bothered to read that far. So I’m sorry it was so terrible you had to send me a comment about how you couldn’t stand it. But the story is finished and I have no intention of going back and changing it.

‎.A year ago A girl named Kathy was hated by everyone. Everyone made fun of her. She was ignored. Even by messages. One day she decided to kill herself. Because even her parents ignored her. She jumed out her window. No one noticed utill people started dissapearing. Kathy haunted them. She made them suffer like the way she did. She hung them slowly and stabed them over and over very slowly so they could suffer like she did.
If you don't send this message to 15 diffrent comments you will die tonight by Kathy. Because she considers it ignooring her.
Example 1:
Dave looked at the first sentece and said,"Spam"And the next day the neighbors found him in his backyard, dead.
Example 2:
Joane was alone. She didn't have kids or a husband. She had alot of friends. When She had a sleepover with them she quickly had to check her e-mail.She saw this message and sent it to only 6 people because she thought she couldn't die that night beacuse she was surounded by people. The next morning Joane's friends found her in her bathtub, dead

How do you come up with these? I can't even get myself to think of something such as you do; I have a terrible imagination sometimes

Go for it

Yeah I know. the story did hit a pointless patch but now im at the point where imma be evil and there'll be a lot more fights >:D i dont use smut to make a story longer .-. i do it cuz its fun to write plus a lot of people like it. but oh well *le shrug* but yeah anyways, more frerard, less smut, more action :D

dude that was the last mikey POV chapter -_-
Frank's POV is coming back, plus less smut.
im actually putting more action into the up coming chapters since its gotten to the point where i actually first planned the story.

I ddnt like dove keeper either. I liked the plot, but again, too slow. :/

I'm already on the sequel, I love it

I re-wrote some of it, I actually think it's better...well i dont know....

Well he's not exactly craving Gerard, he wants him yet he doesnt want him. He only sees the physical beauty, he has a conflict going on, adn oh, his fear of dying is actually going to be a big part of the up coming conflict with Gerard...just saying, if you want I'll re-write it and making his 'yes i want him, no i don't' feelings more clear, if you think it would help.

Well if my story ever gets cheesey tell me...I'll have to throw a fit at myself and fix it. (:

oh ok...well I've never heard of it but it sounds cool!

I have no idea what that is but im gonna hope its good so i can take thats as a compliment :3