oh i hate when that happens. Like you know the general idea for a story but it just isnt coming together.
Well my days goin pretty well. Except the fact my little sister got surgery done on her mouth. that was scary :(
Thank you sooo much for giving my story a chance! :) Your comment gives me a bit of redirection in the first chapter so thank you so much for the help! :)
Haha, I reworked it. There's only one different thing in the beginning, where you told me "stuff," I thought, and went with "fluff." I tried to explain things a little more at the end, I hope I did a better job.
Well, because you reviewed my stuff, I'll review yours. It's only fair <3
No, no, nothing like that. I really appreciated what you said. It's a bit like me to get choppy, so I'm using [b]Maybell[/b] as my "fix-everything-get-better" story. Plus, I really want to work on it. I'm not tearing it all down, just adding in a bit of detail and fixing some words around. I'm really grateful =)
And I won't. I don't think i've ever done that, but it would be sad to start now.