My Wayward Son / Comments

I TOTALLY understand what you mean by "everyone thinks their own writing is bad". You're really not though, and of course I don't hate you after that chapter! The plots good! And i understand your a little writer's blocked, man I hate when that happens. But don't feel like you have to just post crap to make people happy you updated. Take yo timee. haha. but for real I meant what I said about your stories. Theyre really great. I gotta work on posting some of my stuff (even though it's no where near as good as yours)... ANYWAY, don't stop writing!!

_Becky

Lol, you're welcome (: and really? How arethey in the same grade ?

wow, thats how it is in my house. 4 GIRLS! My older sister is basically hated (because of her choices), my baby sister gets all the attention, my sister that was born after me is very rebellious and is always getting yelled at because of her attitude, and me (the second child) i get avoided A LOT but i try getting peoples attention by doing stupid weird shit, which usually works but isn't often. And i agree with all the other stuff too. I think its the same for every one... in different ways, Ya know?
but alright, sounds good (:

Thank you for commenting on Green & Gray. I really appreciate the things you said. Sometimes I feel like my updates are too long, though. :s

You're welcome :3 and okay, CANT WAIT !

haha while it is nice to hear that your story is great, part of the reason we post is to get feedback. I'm glad you are getting something out of mine : )

Okay. Take your time, but I'd just hate to see it end like that, ya know?

hahah d:
no promises ;)
thanks for the comment <3

What's not allowed is that you cannot end the story like that, it's just not right, no fair, so make it better.

Sorry, late reply. >.<
But you are very welcome.
Can not wait for more updates, I'll get right into commenting. (:

What are you talking about. You can't do that to me. It's not allowed.

Thank you soooo much for the story comment!! :) :)

Just, does it get better? I feel horrible for Jack, like I just wanna give him a big hug.

consider yourself hated. jk i have now moved on to a third story called "opposites attract" that authors really good :)

HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!?! Oh, and, for the hate, you deserve it, did she really have to do that to Jack, like seriously? With Warren? God, you're killing me.

Ok, I was really surprised when you said that you were going to stop writing this story after writing in what Alex did. Normally something like that is sets the story off in another direction

Oh that sucks...poor Jack. He didn't his love well considering she's in bed Warren i don't think he wants her at the moment..

There relationship or the story is over??

I think you're a pretty good writer :)
if I didn't think so, I wouldn't read it :$
just sayin' :3

I'll try to start writing soon D:
I've tried before but, I always feel like it's not good at all. ya know? >.<