it's clockwork. / Comments

Wow your totally right.That is so smart and most writers don't do that.They expect the writer to make sense out of a story that has no details or real emotion in it.
And no problem.I love your story.

The video was just amazing!!! :D

omg i knowwww. hahaha like i dont normally like long hair on a guy, but damn. he makes it look so good :D hahaha. and omg! dont even get me started on that body ;) lol. but then again, all footballers pretty much look like that from the neck down. so hott ;) haha okay, gettin carried away.....

i know! i cant believe he has a flippin kid now! ughh. oh well. he's still amazing in my eyes. ;) lmao. and honestly he's been getting so much crap about it, im just like wtf, leave the guy alone. he's got enough shit to deal with on the field

I'm ok wbu?

lol XD ok

lol. we all love sergio ramos :D hahaha he's in the next chapter

thanks for the story comment! and yes, i hope to convince you otherwise of mr. CR9. lol

lol XD well I can't wait to read it<3 when are you gonna update again?

You're welcome and Oh! I get it now! and he really likes her, doesn't he?

yeah i hope they are alryt, i wasnt sure what you had in mind for a banner:)

hey there are two that ive done, they arent to flash but here they are:
1.
http://twitpic.com/23lurt
2.
http://twitpic.com/23lvem

Can't wait!

hey in your authors note in just another barcode against the gone, you said you were looking for banners, ive got one, but have no idea how to get it to you

Okay, I don't know how to review so I'll so it here!!! lol Fudge the spelling/ grammar. I liked it cuz ur story was relateable!!! I would have acted the same way to get my mind off of shit!!! I really liked it!!!

Your story was great!
hopefully you were able to understand my comment
I'm not 100% sure with my English (:

They are hobos then lol.
Yea if he'd gotten him when he was younger it'd be hot.Plus he's so funny.Hot and funny is a good combination. :)

Nah no way haha.I've Jim Carrey shirtless before,sadly no :(
It would look cool on him.But I think he's to old for that kind of stuff.
Aww seriously?That sucks I'm sorry.We have them only cause we don't have cable lol.

They look real to so thats a good job lol.Oh really I have it.Then again I have like a store of movies under neath our tv.

Yes he does.He actually looks hot in the num 23.
But honestly I didn't like the movie to much.It had a sucky ending :/

haha really?!! lol I always make dumb dumb dumb grammar/spelling mistakes and I hope no one notices :P

Awww, thank you thank you thank you!!!
:)