Hell yeah! Okay, the setting is a snowy night in December. There's a full moon glistening in a pitch black night sky, and a girl is waiting alone on a bridge over a nearly frozen river. It's based off a song called "I'm With You" by Avril? Look it up and read the lyrics and the scene should play out in your head. :)
Oh, I'm not complaining. I'm just saying that if you aim to have Vampire Doll published, it'd be good to fix that. Believe me, I have met much worse grammarians lol.
So about the oneshot? Is there anything you want written?
And would you mind taking a look at any of my stories or poems?
I appreciate the constructive criticism. I do notice my punctuation does suck at times, but it's probably because I don't go back and edit my crap after I finish writing. I get quite lazy XP I'll also think about what you said about being a bit more descriptive. Thank you for reading. :D
And for real? Awesome! :) *Tackles self* Lol :P