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  • D_rose

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    Yeah I wanted to get inside the characters heads a little more and knew that was the best way.
    August 25th, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • D_rose

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    I'm glad you like it!
    There's still quite a bunch of chapters left until then. And the sequel will be in Raine's POV for the most part but it'll be Ivan's for a few chapters also.
    August 25th, 2011 at 08:37pm
  • D_rose

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    Okay thanks!
    And you might be a little mad at the end of the first story, but I promise everything gets explained and stuff later.
    August 25th, 2011 at 07:10pm
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    Thank you for reading Give Up And Let Go, it means a lot to me when people take the time to read my creations. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well as the following series.
    August 25th, 2011 at 10:51am
  • DieForBeauty

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    Yay, I'm glad you liked the update. I'm starting the next chapter right now. After going for a run, it sort of got my creativity flowing! :)

    Wow, it's sad that you can't upload them. Leaving the flower was a very nice thing for you to do. :) With all the fans leaving things over thirty years after John's death it really shows the impact that his music had. The Beatles influenced me so much and I think I'd be a totally different person if I never listened to them.
    August 25th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • D_rose

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    Umm well I still have like at least 10 chapters to the current one. So pretty much just when ever- some time in September should be good so I can start working on the sequel.
    August 25th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • D_rose

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    Haha okay good I didn't think you would anyway!
    I can't wait to see how the girls come out!
    Oh and if you could make their ages around 27-30 that'd be awesome!
    August 25th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • D_rose

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    Yay I'm pretty excited!
    Just don't make any of them bitches haha... And also make sure you put down who is dating who with the character.
    August 24th, 2011 at 07:43pm
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    Ok, I can't wait to see what you come up with!
    August 24th, 2011 at 07:37pm
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    Yeah that's a good idea too. You can give them whatever personality traits and what they look like.
    August 24th, 2011 at 06:31pm
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    I really don't care what tattoos they have, use whatever you want!
    August 24th, 2011 at 04:27am
  • D_rose

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    I'll need girlfriends for Jason, Matt and Zoltan [they all don't need one, but you can choose]. And pretty much I'd want them to be tattooed and stuff. They won't have big roles but they'll still be in the story.
    And I put up my new FFDP story today XD
    August 24th, 2011 at 03:26am
  • DieForBeauty

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    Awww thanks. :) I'm glad you like the story so much. Buuut my personal favorite that I've written might be the "Playing Doctor" one or "The Lovers." :)

    That's awesome you like the Beatles! They're pretty influential with their music and everything. Strawberry Fields must have been amazing. :)
    August 23rd, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • DieForBeauty

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    Well, I'm glad to have you as a reader! Generally, I don't make sequels to stories because I think you should just get everything out in the first go haha. But this one's not even done so there is still more writing to come. I'm typing out the next chapter as we speak. :) I'd consider another ATL fanfiction, but not until I finish Six Feet Under the Stars.


    And yeah, vinyl is the best! There's really nothing else like it. And all of those bands are wonderful. They hold a special place in my heart. Especially the Beatles because, honestly, I know too much about them!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 06:24am
  • DieForBeauty

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    Thanks! :) I'm glad you like Six Feet Under the Stars. I would encourage you to check my other stories out, but honestly I'm not happy with the ones I have on here. Well, except for the Jim Morrison one. They're ones I had written before and decided to edit. I probably should have just let them die slowly haha. The All Time Low one is slowly being composed spur of the moment whenever I write. It's exciting!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 04:38am
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    Thank you for the comment :)
    & The story is intentionally told from different POVs :)
    for the sake of the plot,
    it needed to be haha
    I'm glad you like it and please keep reading! <3
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:25pm
  • D_rose

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    I will! And I don't know when I'll start the sequel... probably in a while but I'm getting close to having the entire rest of From Out of Nowhere written. The characters I'll need for that will be girlfriends for the guys.
    And the new story will be put up soon (possibly early September) but the characters for it will be really minor, like you'll see them only twice.
    August 18th, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • D_rose

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    Okay I'll let you know. I think I need a character for my new one and I'll need a couple girlfriends for From Out of Nowhere's Sequel!
    August 18th, 2011 at 05:18pm
  • D_rose

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    Thanks!
    And I'm going to start a new Death Punch story soon because I have loads of ideas for one.
    August 18th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • D_rose

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    Thanks for both comments, I love your comments, they always give good perspective from the reader!
    August 18th, 2011 at 04:19am