I get what you mean about the POV, it's not a habit I usually write in either because I prefer third person a lot of the time but for some reason I just felt that it flowed easier when writing it. I'll be sure to take your criticism kindly though....you didn't sound negative at all...yours, alongside others, were exactly what I was looking for when I signed up with comment swap so you ticked all those boxes :')
You're welcome :-) it really is an awesome story! And too cool, another Hanson fan! Their music is pretty cool, one of my favorite bands. I got a late start, I didn't get around to the fandom until 1998. I didn't like mmmbop *laughs* then I came around when my other friend started listening to them. It's been a long, long road. Too awesome!
I just had to stop by and say how much I adore your story Never Crossed My Mind, oh I hope you update soon. It's very well written. And I really dig your Sons of Anarchy stories too and I've never even seen the show!!! You've got mad writing skills :)
Thank you for the comment (: Please update Never Crossed My Mind it's soooooo good (: Ill try & update mine soon I only use my iPod because my laptop crashes alot
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