Do you have question marks, exclamation points,periods,and comas in the right places??
If you have spell check on your computer,run your story through it.
Fix the errors through that,it might catch something you didn't.
That's effing confusing though.I wish I could provide better help,but I'm just as confused as you are.=/
*hugs*
Its okay.
urgh it's so hard I like them all.
Gunslinger,a little peice of heaven,scream,unbound.
But out of those scream.
I would have sex to that song just for the hell of it.lmao.=]
But yeah I hung out with joey again today.
And this one girl was hanging out with us four.(me,joe,joey,and her)
She started to piss me off.She would lead joe on and then would go straddle joey.which leads to the reason I'm pissed,she played with joe's emotions,then turned around and tried to make a move on joey.She knows I like him,I told her I did,and she said she wouldn't do anything,but she does anyway.
I hate two faced people.
lol.
Mhmm,I'm just fine without a relationship.
I actually enjoy it.
Its just sometimes like around christmas/new years where you kinda wish you had someone.lol.
So how long have you been writing for?
Like stories and poems for yourself.
I am now.
Whats wrong darling?
I'm here to listen.
Mhmmmm,and wow he has the whole sex appeal thing going on.heh.
I'd like to hear about this boyfriend of yours.He must be cool,if he's dating you.
If you have spell check on your computer,run your story through it.
Fix the errors through that,it might catch something you didn't.
That's effing confusing though.I wish I could provide better help,but I'm just as confused as you are.=/
*hugs*
Its okay.