thank you loads for the comment! can I ask you a small question... Its the first time for me that I'm going through with the first person, is it too much?
I don't know how exactly. But maybe just put more detail into them. Looks, styles, the sort of background info you would tell someone. it just helps develop them more. maybe explain how Asher has this gift and why she's do desperate to protect it. What happened to her mom? Like that sorta stuff.
It really was. But it let me move on to other stories, once I stopped fiddling on that one. Since i've joined mibba, in 2008 Russian rullette and psychotic angel are the only stories I've finished. But there will be a sequel to Psychotic angel, already started writing it, and my bf threatened me if a i didn't write one lol
I'm brainstorming on the sequel, don't worry. So lets hope your life doesn't end yet. haha
Thank you for the comment! <3