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DUDE HAVENT TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol thanks
and is everything ok??

ELLIE
lol i changed my name to ellie

xDD

lol so i changed my name from cassie to ellie...did i spell that right hold on let me go to my profile and check xD

It was no problem really. Hey, I just put up a new poem, Daddy's Girl, and I was wondering if you could take a look at it and tell me what you think. If you don't want too, it's cool.

~Ryu

oh its cassie lol

HEY STRANGER!!

Sorry it took me so long to comment on the rest of your poems. My life has been really insane the past couple of months. I hope I made up for it, I didn't want you to think I'd forgotten about you.

~Ryu

P.S. Thanks for the comment on my story. I know there are a lot of characters, which can be kind of confusing.

You know my poem, the one you commented on? "Lustfully My Sister's Keeper?" It's not all in my head, it's real. I actually do long to plant kisses all over my sister's body. I really do want to be inside of her. None of this is just in my head, the only things in my head are the movies I play over and over again of us.....intertwined with each other's bodies. :3

Thanks for commenting, lol I like that alex kid too

Sorry. I DC'd all of a sudden. I'm gonna try to get back in.

I am, just trying to find my notebook

:P lol

I WILLL!! lol and you got 32 votes

lol yah i diddent post the winner becuse no one reads it so i fuigerd id just tell you

omg itz been soooo long!

YOUUUUU WINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Ok, i'll try and sort it out, i'm just trying to write it from her perspective and she doesn't get many details. I've never done a blind story before :-)

Could you tell me what about my story you find vague so I can improve please?

The first two chapters are mainly fillers to let you know what's going on, it gets better from now on

ur still in the lead