It was no problem really. Hey, I just put up a new poem, Daddy's Girl, and I was wondering if you could take a look at it and tell me what you think. If you don't want too, it's cool.
Sorry it took me so long to comment on the rest of your poems. My life has been really insane the past couple of months. I hope I made up for it, I didn't want you to think I'd forgotten about you.
~Ryu
P.S. Thanks for the comment on my story. I know there are a lot of characters, which can be kind of confusing.
You know my poem, the one you commented on? "Lustfully My Sister's Keeper?" It's not all in my head, it's real. I actually do long to plant kisses all over my sister's body. I really do want to be inside of her. None of this is just in my head, the only things in my head are the movies I play over and over again of us.....intertwined with each other's bodies. :3
Ok, i'll try and sort it out, i'm just trying to write it from her perspective and she doesn't get many details. I've never done a blind story before :-)