rwrxxx / Comments

Gracias.

Oh okay! Thanks (: I'll try that in the next chapter

Though I accept that there are perhaps too many positive comments (things which barely go beyond 'great! I loved it!'. Considering it is her first story attacking on aspects which are rather style based perhaps may have been a little excessive, especially as it was a long comment that seemed only to criticise. I will again emphasise that though War Torn Love isn't grammar perfect, it is at least readable.
I also disagree the need for setting the story very exactly - it does come down to style, and it is a fast paced story where things like exact timings aren't exactly necessary. Though a poor writer myself, I know I have a story in which there is a long war and all that is really found out about it in the duration of the story is that it is the politician's solution to world over population, and details don't go beyond that. You don't need it to be as detailed as a textbook with a novel.
I have read a little of your own work and see that you yourself have a very descriptive style which sets things brilliantly, though for some readers it can be harder to read than, for instance, much dialogue. Again something that comes down to style, and I think that considering the topics your stories cover is affective.

That is awesome lol No wonder you're so good! :D

Thanks for the comment! And I know I'm not that great at grammar. I'm trying to get better at it though! And I don't understand what you meant by "Show the reader what makes this Nixon tick; why you tick with him."
Explain please? (:

I know you're trying to give constructive critisism, but have you thought that some of the things you comment might have hurt people? Most of us are on Mibba for fun, to write stories we enjoy writing, and to enjoy stories other people wrote. That's all.
And I just wanna let you know, one of your comments hurt one of my friends, murderdolls_queens (even if that wasn't the intention, it was the outcome).
I would just advise that you think about what you write a bit more before posting it.

thank you so much for your constructive criticism :)

Are you done being rude?

Thank you so much, I would really appreciate any help you're willing to offer me!

And I know what you mean about this site - people don't pay attention to anything but, what? Things that may as well be porn?

Have you ever heard of Writing.com? I was thinking of checking it out, but I'm always nervous about signing up with new writing sites (I don't know why, ha-ha). Someone I used to know on here switched over there and I haven't heard from her since, so... I don't know.

Anyway.

Alright then....

Thank you so much for the comment! I'll be honest, I was shocked anyone took time to put that much thought into a comment, but I really, really appreciate you taking the time to - it makes me want to work on the first chapter more (which is what I'm doing now, actually!), so thank you. I always feel so clueless when I write, so I'm really happy someone was willing to help!

Thanks again!

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to insult you or seem rude! I shall thank you again for your time! It's just my style, I have no hope in progressing, so you see I have little worry for said mistakes you see!

Thanks for the poem comment, eveyone's entitled to their opinions. I write for myself and that was how I felt. In poetry punctuation is not always necessary in poetry, it is a form of expressing yourself. Again, that is how I felt, plain and simple.

Thanks for the feedback. I know I really need to stop repeating but I can never think of something else once I have an idea in my head its usually just one line and repeats

Oh sorry to hear that.
Hope you feel better!

Thank you for the poem comment, though I like using general description, I never usually do in depth detailing. It makes it me when I look at it, and anyone else who cares can see themselves if they wish. And is that a sample because I did nothing of that sort in my poem. I'll thank you for your opinion but dismiss it none the less.

hey im new and ive never written before so i was wondering if u wood read my poems/story and give me feedback thanks!

thank you for the poem comment. I know what you mean. when i wrote it i typed it fast and was upset and wasnt thinking. i wrote a new one called "the one" I hope you like that one better. it has meaning and a clear message. enjoy...=)

Ah, well in that case, i feel special lol
:D

I agree. My poems would probably come out a bit better if i done that.
And when you said 'Finally something right'
Were you talking about out of all my poems?