Broken_Lullaby / Comments

OutSTANDING work! You paint very vivid characters that react to their surroundings exactly the way real people would. Keep it up.

Gracias.


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Thanks for the friend request *grins, hugs* Hey, you don't write some bad stuff yourself! And by 'not bad' I actually mean 'quite good'. And thanks for the story comment! *pulls a joker grin, squeezes you until you can't breathe*

Thanks. Nice to know Im not the only one.

scientists=poo

oh my goodness oh my goodness!!! those pieces of POO!!!

hey everyone must have their poison

thanks again for reading and commenting. A great writer?? Hehehe on the computer it tells me what grade level I'm at in writing, my highest has been a 2.5...my lowest....0.0 Apparently I have the writing skills of a dead cat. But thank you! I feel like the computer has been proved wrong ^^

that's my favorite one to write. i'm so glad you like it. i'm updating today if I can. <33

hey thanks for the friend request and the message. i'm glad you like my stories. which one is your favorite? i'm sami btw.

thank you for reading meh story ^^ I'm happy you like it ^^ i will update soon, please keep reading.

I'm really liking the outline thus far, and interested to see how the separate story lines would work out.
Title ideas, gosh I'm not sure. Sometimes I get the base idea with an ending thought and make a title that would fit with the overall, or there's a reoccuring theme and I'd use that in the title... hrm. It's a tough choice for an author. (and I'm just a tad bit sleepy and out of actual good ideas at the moment. :[ )

maybe from nate's perspective or something. depends on whatever you want to write though.

i liked the story, a really original concept so a sequel of some sort would make it to my Must-Read list.

sequel, continuation from another pov... well, i'd definitely say i want more. :)

So there's a coming finale for Robots? I'm psyched, but I feel bad for Nate, he's so isolated from everything around him.

That's very sweet of what you said in the friend request. =]
Not many people actually read that story because it's an original, you know?
I really loved that you read it. It means a lot to me and I get spazz attacks when people tell me they love it.
So now we're friends! Yay! Haha. *spazz*
How are you?

thank you!
im beth by the way

Sure I would. That sounds cool.
I'll message you about that

Thanks for the poem comment.

Thanks for the comment =) I like writing in first person, much more easier to understand a character that way.