You're doing a really good job at that. Your characters do seem real to me. :)
So, are you planning on updating Their Violence, Your Silence anytime soon?
That's good that she's starting to be comfortable with him, that's very good. And it's also good that he's willing to wait. :)
Haha, I agree completely. I'll have the idea ready, and once I start writing, it doesn't come out the way I wanted it to. Half the time it comes out like shit (to me), and all of my readers are like, "No, no, it was really good! :)". But then again, I'm my own worst critic, which sucks, a lot!
yeah you should totally do it, wattpad isnt difficult, trust me. im really picky when it comes to stories like this, or in general really ahaa so when i say i like it so much is really big because i always end up finding faults with peoples stories eg unrealistic reactions to things and rediculous emotions that change in a matter or 2 seconds. but all i could think of reading this was 'i hope she uploads again soon!!' :)
Hahaha, something that us readers don't know but the writer does, I love it!
I do that all the time with my stories, and I must say that it feels a little weird being on the receiving end. Probably because other author's who I'm subscribed to don't do that often lol. :)
I'm looking forward to it though, whatever it is. And I must say again that even though Amelia is doing this for a serious situation, I still find it quiet hilarious.
I made the "Twilight" reference because I saw another reader did the same. But other than the coincidental similarities (the main female lead moving from her mother's to her fathers, how she falls in love with a vampire, that type of things), it stands alone from "Twilight". And I also can't stand how Edward and Bella act with each other, how he's practically abusive to her. Your two main male and female characters are nothing alike, they're passionate and loving to each other, unlike the two from "Twilight".
I'm also the same way with my stories. I love getting comments, but when they just say "I loved the update! Can't wait for the next!" I'm like, huh? I'm always wishing they would add a little more depth. That's why I leave long comments on other's stories, because I myself don't care for the little comments that are repeated twenty million times over the course of the story's life.
When I first came to this web site I didn't think there would be any well writin stories, but then I read your and I was blown away!
You are very talented and I hope you have a successful life in writing your stories.
heheh so much love? aren't i vague :') i read it while i was playing xbox yesterday afternoon and kept dying on halo because i didnt want to stop reading it xD it's fantastic!