Kiakara17 / Comments

hehe thank you for the poem comment~ :D

thanks for your poem comment :)

Oh crap...I got a best friend named Monica...maybe you're her long lost clone o.o XD Thx for commenting on my poem :)

Thanks for the poem comment :] <33 ^0^

Thank You!
You don't know how much it means to me <3

he's secretly mine too lol

Thank you a million times for the comment. c:

oh my god i'd love to :) and i know i'm already really far into it, so i can understand if you can't, but if you wouldn't mind sometime looking at my "treason in the highest degree" story, that's be awesome :)

Thanks for the story comment! :D I appreciate it!

oh my god yeah i loves those too haha X)

Thank u :)

oh i can't pick just one lol but supernatural, fully alive, all around me, red sam, this close, in the dark, justice and mercy, okaylight in your eyes, and dear my closest friend are my favorites :)

i love your layout :) haha i got real excited when i saw you liked Flyleaf, they're my absolute favorite!!! :) almost no one knows them though. it's a tragedy really.

thanks :)

Thanks so much for the comment:) it means alot

Thank you for the comment :)

Ello! Just wanted to welcome you to Mibba.. If you ever need any help with anything, or are just bored, I'm pretty much always online so.. don't hesitate to come ask/say hello/whatever... I'm Jacklyn :)

Thank you for the comment on my poem, Never Be The Same. I really appreciate it (: I honestly dont want others to relate to my poetry cause then it means that theyve got some turmoil to see to and are upset or depressed because thats what I feel when I write. I hope your doing ok. IF you want me to read something of yours specifically, id be glad to (:

Sorry if that's confusing, I tend to blabber on.. =D

For your story, you need to use proper grammar and spelling. Otherwise you can get reported.
A little advice! It's never the best to start your stories... in the middle of the story, if you know what I mean. You can start at childhood, flip through the years a bit maybe, so the reader gets an idea of what the hell is going on. I made that mistake a few too many times. Never got subscribers and nobody reads it sorta thing.
OORRR- you could start with violence, if it's based off school with the bulling thing, you can start off with something about being slammed into a locker or something.
Good luck!
R