I know its a bit delayed but thanks for the comment on so far away, I know out grammer is terrible we are trying to work on it thanks for pointing it out it gives us more incentive to better it. Also my names Katie tooo so thats epic :D
I know that picky, editing comments can piss some people off, but I find them really helpful. So, I give them when I can :)
I watched Thor last night and I dunno if you've seen it, but there's a part in it that makes you think Loki would NEVER accept a human woman as a partner, haha. Like, he's clearly above our race in his mind :P But, like you were hoping, I'm just going with it because my god, it's Loki. I guess it's like any other fanfic you read, where some girl meets the band and goes on tour with them. That'd never happen, but it's nice to read about when it's written properly :)
You're doing a good job of fitting your story into the movie. I've only seen it once, but what you write seems to make sense. I guess the only horrible thing is knowing how it ends for Loki :P I've never wanted the bad guys to win so bad haha
Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you liked it despite not knowing who it was written about. I really wanted a main character like LaRae, who is extremely quirky and not necessarily gorgeous and charismatic. I've gotten stuck reading stories I don't understand through comment swap more then a few times!
The story was entered for a band fic contest, hence that's why I chose Brendon from P!ATD. He has this "paranoid" look on his face sometimes and I have a twisted mind, so I decided to combine them together. The idea just popped in my head after watching numerous vids of the 'Miami Zombie' on youtube.
Glad you enjoyed it nonetheless, though I must admit it is a bit short...
Honestly I was torn between having her pass before Paul got there or having it go the way it did. When I finally got to where I was writing that scene I just went ahead and did it. I think it would be too...I'm not sure what the word is.
Thank you for commenting on mine and Darkbunny96's story 'So far away'. We have been told about or grammar and are already improving it, so don't worry, hopefully it will get easier for you to read. If not please do not hesitate to tell us so... Just don't roport us. Darkbunny already got reported for grammar. Some people are just so anal.
Anyway thank you again, and I hope you enjoyed it.
I have to give you an insanely big thank you for doing that. And that's fantastic that you could relate! And I'm glad you felt the way you did about Zayn and Laila respectively, because those are the emotions I was trying to coax out of readers :)
Hm. The middle... I'll pay special attention to that area next time I get to rereading it. Seriously, thank you very much. This will help a lot!
Thank you so much for the wonderful, insightful comment on my fic :) And yes, I get what you mean, haha.
And ohmygosh, that is exactly what she is!
(Now, just out of curiosity, if you read through Chap. 4, I'd love to know what you thought of it, because I'm not too satisfied with it. But if you didn't read it I can ask somebody else :) )
Hey! Thanks very much for your comment on my story! I am extremely glad that you like it and thank you so much for subscribing :) Reading your comment made me feel all giddy :D
Thanks for the comment on EMFATCGD. It just took me awhile to get back in the story line during those months I wasn't writing. I'm glad you liked it (:
Thank you for the comment on my story.[: Its not how Frank is being portrayed. I find most fic depict him as this hyperactive super nice guy who loves skittles lol. That's just *my* portrayal of him. I follow him on Twitter and he's always being super sarcastic and even a little rude. So I go by that. hah. :] but thank you bunches!
Thanks for your comment on Walk Beside Me! I'm very glad you liked it; was it found through Swap?
And I know about the single-apostrophe thing. I was originally writing what became Chapter One as a flashback, so I planned to use doubles later on, but I liked it too much and just forgot to go back and edit out the singles.