Yeah I just realized that I was writing niece today and I was all BLA so I'm going to change it when I post the next chapter but I don't know when that will be cause I have to do homework and this is the worlds longest run on sentence.
Hehe, most people seemed to understand what was happening, but that's alright!
Indiana is a GIRL, Aisan to be to the point, her chapters are the odd #'s and are in her POV. Mr. Bunnell (aka George) is a male and 29 years of age, 13 years older than Indiana's 16. He has a niece who is names Ian and is 16. Ian is friends with Gavin who has a POV on the even # chapters. Gavin adn Indiana don't know eachother, but in the end they want the same thing.
If that didn't clarify enough, just tell me and I'll explain even FURTHER! I don't mind it.
Well thank you for the darling comment, it was really nice of you!
You want to strangle my characters?
I laughed when I saw that, it lit up my entire day!
It must have evoked some sort of emotion!
I wont give away too much, but if you plan on reading onward, I'd advise you to prepare yourself for one emotional rollercoaster!
I know they're fillers, and I almost hate it. Things begin to pick back up after Emmeline's born. I meant to make these two fight a lot, but that seemed to not happen... There's still time. I hate boring chapters but sometimes my mind runs completely dry on me.
Hehehe, I know, I know. I try to be nice to them. But sometimes it makes for better drama to be mean.
Aww, that makes me feel insanely awesome, so thank yahh! ^_^
I know, it's so cool! It's like I have power over these little people.
Sometimes I think I enjoy it too much.
And thank yahh! It would be awesome if he was.
And I loved your comment on the story. :P
Ohhhh I know. Sometimes I get jealous writing it.
I've got it in my head he's really like that.
It would be amazing if he is. Because I think he's a pretty awesome character.