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lilia spinas. (150)

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Thanks for your comment on Instinct! To answer your questions:
1) The prologue was set in the early 1900's, but the rest of the story will be modern day Sometime between 2007-2011
2) I guess it's Alternative world since no of the things in my story ever happened or existed. I'm not sure if I understand what you mean.

I definitely noticed that also. I've kind of been struggling with what person to write this story in I think it's necessary to capture all the details of the story, but I want to have that personal touch a first person narrator adds. I'm glad you gave me feedback on it considering no one else had noticed and I definitely wanted to make a decision on that before proceeding. Thanks for the helpful feedback!

June 13th, 2012 at 06:48am

blasttyrant (100)

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Thanks for your comment. To answer your questions, I explain in a later chapter that Amanda Barton has been a spy/assassin nearly her whole life. I wrote her to be a strong, independent character that tries not to show emotion. Those are the reasons for her seeming not to care about her brother's situation. Also, the radiation. This is a month after, so any negative affects would have already been found/made themselves known.
Thanks again for your comment. :)

June 13th, 2012 at 02:40am

Meru21 (100)

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thanks for the comment on "The Angel Within". It's not too soon for her to be spilling. Runa is the type to do anything to keep Les from finding out. Les is her most important person and she wouldn't be able to stand if he was taken away, run out of town, or treated her differently. Because Jareth threatened to out her, which would cause a rift between her and Les in the worst way, she told Jareth what an ass her family is. She didn't really go into detail, just gave him an overview in true Runa-fashion. Jareth would have figured it out even if he hadn't threatened her for confirmation. If you have marks like that, even if you're unfamiliar with them, you just know. . This changes things between them, too. Not really for the better. lolol. ;) It ought to make things more interesting.
Also, there are pictures of the characters in the summary. Just click on their names. ^^

August 26th, 2011 at 04:29am

yell0ws0cks (100)

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um ok thanks for the advice lol

August 2nd, 2011 at 03:43am

seamonkey101 (100)

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I have a nook color too.

July 26th, 2011 at 09:12pm

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