From the looks of how long it is, it will probably take me a while to get caught up (slow reader.. love catching onto small details :D), but once I get there, I'll definitely tell you what I think! I can talk with you about it sometime when you're less busy (You have about a million comments). You could read my (three... >.>) poems if want, too :)
Started reading your story!
So good!
(Going to get back to reading it now...) Love Elizabeth and Shaquila xD
Welcome to Mibba and all that jazz.
Like your username, by the way. Love Spanish.