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I find them to be rather poetic... Though your approach was quite original.

thank youuu

Thank you. I have a lot of people tell me that. Most of my friends even joke with me about me being living proof that not all guys are simple minded and can actually have deep thoughts. I just posted up one of my old poems, as for yours I enjoy them a lot so far. Your structure is supportive and fluid. Poems, unlike stories are more likely to be filled with more emotion because they're mainly written to express someone's feelings. Stories are usually harder to writer because you have to actually come up with a good plot, setting, events and even character development. Sadly, some people get to the point of thinking up these things and writing like machines, making their stories robotic instead of expressive. It's most apparent in authors that have been writing for years who eventually lose sight of their human side. Writing, no matter what genre of form, will always be an art and a passion, never a job or simple pass time.

Also, I plan on writing a few poems every other couple of days to get some work put up on the site, and to give people something to read and enjoy while I finish the story.

Thank you, it is something I made up. I'm currently working on a story with a fantasy and romance genre but I'm afraid it won't be out for a while. I'm waiting till I have all the chapters done and edited so that way people won't have to worry about me not having the next chapter ready in a day after they have read the previous one. You're very pretty Aslyn and I can't wait to read your story and some of your poems.

I enjoyed your comment, so don't hesitate if you have anything else to say or something to ask. Everyone deserves to be heard, even if they're "just another voice".

Yay! :D
Haha it's really good.
I plan on having a story up here soon, i hope it'll be as good as that. xD

thank you bunches for the story comment(:

i'm so glad you like my story! (: thanks for commenting!

I am amazing.(: I just started my story a couple days ago and I already have thirteen subscribers.(: Eek! Sorry. I get over excited sometimes.(:

Hello again . :3
How are you on this lovely erh, Washington summer day? (:

Oh? Was it nice there?

I'm working on my story.(: I feel so accomplished. Lol.

Yeah, I think that would work perfectly.(:

you are an amazing poet! I was reading the poem and I could just relate to all the tension and sadness in it. The only thing is I think you should make it a bit longer. The end just sounded like you were cutting off everything. But it was so good. I think you should continue.(:

okay.(: Well I just want to let you know that whatever you put on here, whether it be a story or poem, I'd be delighted to read it and give you my honest opinion.(:

Yeah. I know.(: I love meeting people from Washington on Mibba. It's really cool. (:
Anyway, do you write any stories?

So we live quite a ways away from each other.
Lol.(:

Of course not! I live on the very edge of Puyallup in a small town called South Hill. It's about fifteen minutes away from the Puyallup Fair. You? (:

Hello.
I feel like a creeper, but I just wanted to say I'm from Washington too. (:
Bahahh. It's nice to meet you!

Wow another Washington person? What part are you from? If you don't mind me asking.