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Okay now I think I'm falling in love with Sean. Behind all of his shenanigans, he's such a playful, fun-loving guy. I LOVE IT. I've been half expecting him to rape Olivia or harass her in some way, but he hasn't done any of that, and it's making me love him even more. She can truly trust this guy. And yes, *ehm*, I want Olivia to give him a chance. You know, since she's been with Jack for so long, I think it's good that she checks out all the other fishes in the sea. After all, if Jack and Olivia were meant to be, they'll be.

So with that said...even though I really really want Jack and Olivia to fix everything and get back together, I am now Team Sean haha!

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It's like a light bulb went off in my head and I instantly remembered the boxes and how they were just laying all over the house. Also, the way she got tense when Sean asked her about it. Ahhhhh! haha I can't wait to see what happens next.

Really? Awesome! You could be the first reader! And thank you so much.

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]font=verdana]Really? Awesome! You could be the first reader! And thank you so much.

You're welcome!

Wow! It's 4 pm here. Such a time difference. And I completely understand. I'm trying to work on a new story to get my mind off the story I have on here now. So far, I have a page down. But, it's just scattered thoughts. Hopefully, I can turn it into something.

And I've read the latest chapter and left a comment. It was AMAZING. Seriously. I love the way you portrayed Olivia's feelings. I could imagine every scene in my head so vividly because of your incredible descriptions.

Keep up the great writing, my dear. You're on a roll!

[font size=Verdana]It's my first and only story on here. It's called "Never Let Me Go." I'd love it if you could read it and tell me what you think! I'd really appreciate it! Thank you so much in advance.

Here's a link to it [x]

And so far, you're doing a great job conveying Sean's character. I like him, but I like Jack better and I want to read more about him! I can't wait to see your progression.

You’re very welcome. I agree -- I love getting feedback on my story! But I haven't been getting much lately since my updates have been slow due to college. Unfortunately, now that school is not an issue anymore, I'm struggling to write up the next chapter. Guess I just need to get back into the grove of writing haha.

Regarding Sean and the whole situation, I actually liked that you introduced him into the story. Putting him in the chapter was so refreshing for Olivia because he temporarily broke that feeling of despair she seemed to have hovering over her head like a cloud. Although I thought it was cute that he somehow found a way to bring Olivia's spirit up, I still feel sadden by Olivia and Jack's break up. And in the end, this story would only have a happy ending if she ended up with him.

You made it a point, no worries!

I really like Sean, but in the end she should end up with Jack.
Just my opinion, but most don't listen... Just do what feels right!(Best peice of advice ever xD)

Thanks! I thought your story was very good as well. I'm sure it'll become very popular! :D

Thanks for the comment! And thought I'd love for you to subscribe, the story's finished. :(

Haha, I meant like the typical high school love stories. They're just so overused. Like I said, I'm not bashing, I use the same plots. Sorry I wasn't clear about it.

Not really and I tend to over analyze things. Thanks for the advice. I'll try it out.

Well, I guess the real question is do I have to incorporate the song into the story or just write whatever is inspired by the song?

Thanks for the comment :)
I'll consider it next time ^^

I'll start yours now ;3

Aw, you're welcome. I would so live in a barn like that. xD

your welcome. :) I think it was written pretty well myself.

I understand that something else has to happen first or of course it wouldn't make any sense. I guess I'm just one of those people who always likes happy endings. Never really got out of that fairy tell stage if you know what I'm saying.

I'm sure when you do get around to writing why she did it will be good and make sense with what's going on.

thankyou.

YaY!
I've been alright. Going shopping today. :)

Thank you! & you're forgiven. :)