You're very welcome! The beta readers have a little tag under their names that says "beta reader" like the admins and all, but for some reason when I go to the members page there is no page for the beta readers :/ I can't think of anyone off the top of my head, but I've seen them around and I can look into it if you want
Hiya! No problem :) And honestly it wasn't really something that was distracting, it didn't take away from your writing but I did notice this instance: "I felt like screaming at the top of my lungs for them to shut the fuck up; I keep quite though." It was the "keep" that got me. (and it should be quiet not quite :P) I really do love your main character though haha, she's sarcastic and witty, I like it!
Just wanted to stop by and say thanks for the comment on Blood and Thunder. It's greatly appreciated. Thank you so much for pointing those things out, I loved hearing someone point out exactly what they liked in the story, especially since I was a bit skeptical about the first chapter.
I suppose, though I'm really just a cashier so I check people out with that cool little barcode scanner thingy-it's kinda fun to use, to be honest ;D Hahah! I have learned some about hardware from working there though, yes.