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hey um thank you for reading and enjoying my poems

hm, i don't know that prayer. i'm not a very religious person..... but i do know the pledge of allegiance! 'i pledge allegiance to the skittles (flag), of the united states of america. and to the skittles (republic), for which it stands, one nation, under skittles, with skittles (liberty) and skittles (justice) for all.' much better than the original. lol.

ok, you seriously need to go get some skittles! they're god's gift to humanity.

lol. yeah.
mmm, chocolate. i've been binging on skittles lately, so i need some chocolate. and i'm not one of those ppl that says thy're obsessed w/ skittles cuz its cool. i've loved them for years.

i know. i like to interpret it my way. i hate it when peopl tell me i'm wrong. its like 'how do you know?! are YOU the poet?! NO! so fuck off!' but i think if i said that to a teacher, i'd get expelled....
i'm good! you?
ahhh, easter! the best day to do stuff. everyone is at church. and i get candy. lol.

it does. and i don't like most of the poets and stuff we had to choose from. it was all so stupid. about trees and shit....

yeah, its just the essay i had to write for my 10th grade english class. its pre-IB ebglish, so she didnt even bother to explain it, cuz we're apparently smart enough to figure it out on our own. ugh. she's still better than my last teacher tho....

it was stupid. i wanted to do like, song lyrics, but my teacher said they would have to be in a published book. and i couldnt think of any band who had their lyrics in a legit book. i like poetry, but i only like it on my own time.

yhanx for the comment. or prompt was
1) intro
2) tone/theme
3) speaker/theme
4) conclusion
it was really weird.....

I just updated "The Caged Heart" and I wanted you to know! If you have the time, it would be much appreciated for you to read and review! Thank you!

Thank you for your advice and help :) I really hope he'll talk to me soon.

Hi, I just updated "The Caged Heart" for the second time in two days! wooo! and since you commented it before, I thought you would like to know! Please read and review, if you want! thanks!

thanks(:

ahaha thank you for the advice mary(:

i've been trying, but the damn mall keeps closing early and i'm getting real impatient.

THANKS THOUGH! <33

i updated the caged heart! please read and review if you want! XD merry christmas!

I've updated TWSOF. Sort of, it's more of an announcement, but still.
xD

Most likely to need a Most Likely section.

Thanks for the comment and advice on my journal! :)

I updated "the Caged Heart." please read and review if you feel like it!

New updatet for The World Set On Fire.
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I spilted coffee!!! They is ruined! I has to do new ones.