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  • woolworm

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    omfg. of course. we're gonna be fucking huge, like, we constantly talk about it. we're too much of music elitists and perfectionists -- we've got music down to science -- to not make it. we'll totally fly you out to shows and shit, just keep in touch. like we're literally dedicated the rest of our lives, short or not, to becoming an iconic music group.

    i'll show you some of our stuff when we post more on our band blog -- we haven't had time to record and whatnot.

    how have you been?? x3
    August 10th, 2012 at 08:38am
  • temporary bliss.

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    We litterally seem to be the same person. All of the problems you listed are the same exact ones I deal with! I used to try and sit here and think out an entire story before I even began writing it. I mean, so many other people did it that way and they had some of my favorite stories, so I assumed I could do the same, but it's just something some people are good at, and some arent. I can't get anything when i try to think it all out.
    For me, a single idea will pop into my head. "A girl comes back to her hometown, engaged, and runs into her bestfriend, who she is in love with." simple enough right? so, from that, i get together the first chapter, and litterally, ill sit at the computer, open up word and just begin writing. Half the time, what I start out with, like what i think ill put in there, usually ends up being tossed aside and something completely different ends up happening.

    As for writer's block, that is something i get almost every time i sit down to write as well. when im busy with school, or just busy in general, i have all these creative juices flowing and just so many things to put in my stories, or even to create new stories, and of course, im busy and can't do anything. But the moment i get home and have time to sit down and write, it's gone, i don't feel like writing , and i can't think of anything to write. it sucks. What Ive done to somewhat cope, is for example, if im at work and i get an idea of how a scene should go down, ill open up notepad on my phone and type in the most important points, that way, when i get home, ive got something to go off.
    Another thing for block that helps me, is to read a few stories before i write, watch a tv show or a movie. it sounds lame and generic, but the smallest thing, like the way a character looks at the other, the way he asks her out, the way they finally get together, it all can help you!
    August 10th, 2012 at 08:31am
  • woolworm

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    I'M SORRY. i thought you hadn't answered me, i was like: what did i do wrong ;_;

    i've been alright, working on stuff for the band and such. ugh. i miss talking to you, i wish i would get my cellphone back already.
    August 8th, 2012 at 01:45pm
  • temporary bliss.

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    yes! i've noticed you're an avid reader and commenter and i'm extremely thankful! you are actually one of my favorite readers because your comments are always just the best and make me decide against quitting a story! So any way i can help you, i'm more than willing!

    I know exactly how you feel, when you first start writing on mibba, or just writing in general, it's a bit difficult and nerve wracking because you haven't really found your style yet, what your best at, and sometimes you really want to do a story, or you really want to try out a different writing style, and by all means, totally try it out! But don't worry, it'll come easier once you get an idea of what you're most comfortable with!

    As for tips, what do you feel you're struggling with? I can give a few general tips, but i feel like it'd be a lot better to give you tips that specifically help you with something you're struggling with. (:
    August 8th, 2012 at 02:48am
  • woolworm

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    i completely understand. it really sucks when parents found out that you're not as healthy as they believed you were. i still get sick knowing my dad can treat me like shit knowing how unstable i've been the past year.

    how have you been?
    August 2nd, 2012 at 09:57am
  • postitmonster

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    Haha, your comment reminded me of the part of the movie Step Brothers where they realize they both like whatever it is, I forget, and they say, "Did we just become best friends?" "Yup!" XD Anyway, thanks for the comment! You get well soon, too!
    July 27th, 2012 at 08:21am
  • woolworm

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    i don't know if this will make me a shitty friend and you'll hate me in the future, but my closest friend in real life has an eating disorder as well, and every time she eats in front of me she eats a lot. like we had pizza once and she ate 5 slices. she eats more than a normal person would/needs so that people will think she is okay, you know? she also drinks coffee because it helps you burn off fat.

    okay i feel bad for telling you this stuff but i just want to help you but i don't want to make you upset/mad if you don't want help and if you'll feel like i'm prying. ughj ;lfkd;asfkd;lsfk;ldsf
    July 27th, 2012 at 01:10am
  • woolworm

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    Why are you paranoid? cx
    And I hope you're all better now. Mr. Green
    July 26th, 2012 at 10:49am
  • woolworm

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    I miss you.

    I was trying to write a new chapter for the Sid story but I feel too depressed. Bahaha.

    The other day I was listening to the Cure and I just thought of you because I know you like them too.
    July 23rd, 2012 at 10:43am
  • nielsen.

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    Hey, you're on my list to be informed when I start a new Avenged Sevenfold related story. I've begun posting a new story entitled Bound Together. If you're interested, please check it out; if you're not, just ignore this.

    http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/458575/Bound-Together/

    xoxo, Saleigh
    July 20th, 2012 at 01:08pm
  • NineLies

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    Your wish is my command :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • iron and wine.

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    Thanks for the comment on Addicted :)
    July 9th, 2012 at 09:44pm
  • postitmonster

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    Thank you for the comment :) I would update a lot more often but I'm at work a lot! I promise I'll update as soon as I can. I'll probably write it tonight and post it in the morning.
    July 8th, 2012 at 04:46am
  • Short Change Hero.

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    Holy crap, it's been forever and a day since I've been on here! I'm just writing to everyone, letting them know, that I will be re-writing 'Deranged' and it'll have some new twists. So, keep your eyes open for it! And, sorry it's been so long!
    June 29th, 2012 at 03:34am
  • woolworm

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    Hasn't it? c: How are you, girl?
    June 20th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • McKenna Haner

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    Especially if it's one of those Quaker granola bars with the foil-ish wrappers that crinkle every time you touch it. We never win.
    June 20th, 2012 at 01:03am
  • McKenna Haner

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    Then you get a granola bar handed to you by a friend :D
    That's why people should always carry around granola bars or fruit snacks.
    June 20th, 2012 at 12:08am
  • McKenna Haner

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    So do I. It's horrible. Also, if your stomach makes the whale noise once, it'll probably do it again and then you sit there and talk to your stomach.
    June 19th, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • McKenna Haner

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    Or when your stomach makes the dying whale noise when it's totally silent in class.
    June 19th, 2012 at 02:03am
  • loadedexcuses

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    Hahahaha pretty much! I will actually be updating rather shortly, so sit tight!
    June 15th, 2012 at 06:36am