When someone is being nice and offers you help, you do not spit in their face, nor do you act like a bitch to them for no reason, calling them fuckers. You cussed at EVERYONE who joined the room who have done you no wrong over your own anger problems. You should learn how to control your emotions, and not let them control you. You need to grow up a bit, in all that it is, life is partly about learning to control yourself.
So I'm finished revising your chapter. I'll just email it. I hope you like it. I kind of changed it. It sounded better this way, but if you don't think so just change it again. :)