Marissa.Motionless / Comments

Um okay. What`s the name of the story?

They`re okay. Iv`e read a few of them but they get kind of annoying after a while. Why do you ask?

Not Good Enough For Truth or Cliche is a really good song.
I listened to that one and Something like 50 times yesterday.

Which one.
Something is a really good new ETF song.

Yep yep.
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I know I prefer Avenged Sevenfold,BVB,Escape The Fate,and Falling In Reverse more now.

I'm okay.
I'm no longer a die hard MCR fan though.:'(

Hey. We haven't talked in a long time. How are you?

Sorry I haven't updated in sooooo long, I've been really busy with GCSE's and things, I'll try and update soon though (:

Hey.
How are things?

It's not a problem at all, and you definitely have time to expand and improve your writing. When I was your age, my writing was completely atrocious, but I've improved since then. You just need to practice and listen to constructive criticism is given to you. It kind of stings at first, but you get used to it, you know? Anyways, I hope to read more of your story!

Well, I have a Killjoy one going on at the moment. It should be around 16 or so chapters because I've got it based of the Na Na Na and Sing videos, just threw in some romance. Then I have a vampire one going on, because I like MCR better from the Three Cheers days, because that's when I got into them, in '04. Then I believe I have a drug addiction one with Gee, too. Then another one about Chris Cerulli from Motionless in White, a Jackass theme story with Saleigh, or Teenage Reject, you might have heard of her xD Then an OC story called 75, with another friend, and I've got an idea for a Skyrim story, cause I'm obsessed right meow xD

Well, I have a Killjoy one going on at the moment. It should be around 16 or so chapters because I've got it based of the Na Na Na and Sing videos, just threw in some romance. Then I have a vampire one going on, because I like MCR better from the Three Cheers days, because that's when I got into them, in '04. Then I believe I have a drug addiction one with Gee, too. Then another one about Chris Cerulli from Motionless in White, a Jackass theme story with Saleigh, or Teenage Reject, you might have heard of her xD Then an OC story called 75, with another friend, and I've got an idea for a Skyrim story, cause I'm obsessed right meow xD

Pahaha, that's funny, I'm currently working on a Killjoy story as well xD It's called Danger Days .o. I pre-write so I don't have it up yet. I'll be sure to check out your stories when I don't have so many going on meow. (I'm writing 6 with two other ideas floating around in my skull.)

Most of them mainly focus on their music career or take place while they're in high school. Yours is obviously very different, but in a good way lol.

I know, i love fries and ice cream myself, that's how i came up with it. lol.
And I've saw them before but the excitement is still there every time i see them!(=
Thanks for the story comment.

omg xD I feel stupid for not remembering that. I'm sorry

You're welcome. I try not to leave crappy comments on stories 'cause I know that for myself I hate when people just say 'update soon'. That tells me nothing at all about what they think of whatever I wrote. Writers can only get better when they know what their readers like and/or dislike so that's what I try to write about in my story comments. The only time I ever leave a 'bad' comment is when a chapter hasn't really given me much to think about.

You're welcome! (:

Of course! I'll let you know what I think! (: