lollipopemily / Comments

which story specifically? Depending on how much you've written already it might take me awhile to catch up and such. I'm usually not a busy person but lately with school and everything else I haven't been able to read as such as I'd like too :/

Not really a fan of either bands so I have no idea how much help I'd be

It all depends on what you're writing about.

I listen to Asking Alexandria occasionally, but sometimes I listen to System of A Down. I like the song BYOB, haha :D

not only 1D, to be honest, I don't listen to pop music anymore. 1D, Ed Sheeran and basically British musicians are the only expections in my playlist. I mostly listen to hip-hop and rap, judge me haha. Like, I love Nicki Minaj :D

what kind of music do you listen to? (:

sure what kind of help?

hey, I'm Chrissy (Christina), nice to meet ya (:

Hey whats up?

Yeah, that sounds like a good idea! Good luck!

Watch a good movie or read a book. Usually it makes me want to write and I get a lot of ideas. It doesn't feel right if you try to force it out of you, you know? I don't know, that's really all I can say for now.

Aren't they going to play a show if they started running to the stage? Figure out what happens after the show, like, they could go drinking or Ben and the girl could have some alone time. But, and hopefully you won't get offended, as I read the last chapter, it was kind of like "then we went there and then we did that and then we did that and then that happened" you know? Maybe you could add a little more colour into it, like, describe things and their thoughts more. Hope this helps?

Okay so what do you need me to do?

Well, what do you need help with? I'll see what I can do, okay?

Sorry!

Probably not, sorry! I've got no time right now, I'm writing an ending to one of my stories and I want it to be perfect

I probably could help you with the story but I don't think I'd have the time to be a co-writer right now. If I didn't write my own stories at the moment, I'd definitely say yes without a doubt but yeah, I don't think I can focus on so many stories at the time. But I'll help with what I can!

I've honestly never thought about having a co-writer, probably because I want to make all the decisions on my own story, but I believe it works well and yeah, I suppose you're right, it's easier to write when the other writer gives some direction to you. Have you thought about having a co-writer with that story, then?

Hahah, aww, well, thanks! I'm not that great and to be honest I often find my stories a bit boring but I guess that I always have a plan before I start writing. Though, of course I get writer's block, too, but not really recently. But I suppose I can't really help you because I can't tell you what to write because then it would become my creation and not yours. All I can say is that it takes a lot of practice and time to make it work well. So if you're having a major writer's block, I'd suggest that you find a good book or a movie, that'll help you find ideas to your story. Hope this helps! :)

Hmpfh, well, that's a tough one. I'm not too sure about the concert thing but after the concert I'd say that they're going to a bar or something and get drunk. That's an easy situation to write about because when there's alcohol, there's also sex or fights or something.

I just read the whole thing really quickly but I've got to ask, when you started writing the story or when you decided that you we're going to write it, what kind of a story did you plan to write? Like, where are you going to go with it? How is it going to end? Because I hope that you have decided at least the ending and what it's going to be like, though you can change it along the way there, but I'd say it's rather important to know where the story is going and how it's going to end. And once you know how to end it, you'll figure out what happens next and then what happens after that etc. and all those things will lead to the ending. You know?