Thanks! Yeah, it just doesn’t flow to me. But I guess that’s to be expected since I wasn’t alive during that time period. Lol. And I definitely wanted them to have much more proper speech since they’re so old and well off, I suppose. But yeah. Thanks! I’ll update soon. :D
I'm sorry to hear that you've lost to cancer, too. =( I think most people have. I lost my grandfather to it when I was ten. My grandmother's now battling it for the third time.
It did indeed just turn out to be a cyst, so even though it's a large one, I am very, VERY relieved. I'm the sort of person whose mind goes to the worst places, so honestly I'm just glad it wasn't cancer or something equally nasty. D= Still, surgery is a possibility here, and that makes me nervous.