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I'm going to sound like a total depressive shit, but do the Manson Murders!
or..that might be considered "too recent", I guess. Hahahaha.
Ah. I have a better one! Do the Dust Bowl Era/Dirty Thirties. That's interesting.

Do more history articles! Ah.

Thank you so much for your critique of my story. It's refreshing to hear something other than, "That was really good, update!" c:

thanks for your comment!
I'm always looking for suggestions, what minor details could I fix? I was just trying to keep it in the 5-7-5 format~

im doing the same just got back from spring break today :(

You should! I taught myself, so I guess I cannot really speak on how hard it is or isn't, because I don't play formally (more for pleasure). It's rewarding, though, if you're dedicated. It makes a beautiful noise.

I love the guitar. I like acoustic a hundred times more than electric, I admit. The piano is my favorite instrument. I'm a pretty huge fan of the ukulele, though, so it's a close second. :)

Oh, that sounds wonderful. Ha. What instrument(s) do you play?
I, myself, play piano, drums, and a little of what I've picked up from my brother on acoustic guitar, but I'm not, in no way, what you'd probably consider listening-able.

Nothing much sitting in my graphics class doing absolutely nothing lol wbu?

me too.

I'm sure I could then lol. I prefer writing and dancing though.

Cool beans. I'm musically challenged no idea how to play any instruments.

Hahah I suppose. What do you play?

Bleck, college and work mostly. What about you?

Glad I could help. (:

Not underwhelming. In fact, your comment was 5 times better than most the comments I've received in comment swaps. Most of them just state the obvious, so I'm glad you pointed specific instances and such out. I do appreciate that, it was helpful.

No problem. I always think how I want people to give constructive criticism on my own stories, so I'm more than happy to give it myself. Sometimes I feel a bit overbearing, though, so I'm sorry if my comment came off a bit like that. You've got a great story going for you. Hope to read more soon!

Thanks for the comment on my story, [b]The Elephant's Trumpet[/b]. Even though it was a comment swap, I appreciate the fact that you took the time to read and comment. Thank you for the advice about the pronouns, as well.

Take care. (:

believe it or not but ive made a few really good friends on here. and i can tell that your gonna be another

ok thanks and the same goes for you.