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Hey love! How have you been?

Auto correct sucks, that should say its not out, and him not them.

Awkward how? It is him.... Lol and just because you are gay it doesn't make you any less of a woman. You just like other women. :) and out still is not ok. do you go to school with them?

Him? A boy hit you? There isn't one damn reason in this whole fucking world that a man sould EVER lay his hands on a woman. I swear if I don't teach my son anything, he will by god at least know better than to do that. I've been hit by a man before and there isn't one good reason for it at all.

My grandmother tells me that twice a week. :) It's "Alice, you are getting fat, that baby will ruin your figure, and you are going to meet Hades for raising that baby out of wedlock." I mean who says that? lol Your momma don't mean that. Deep down she loves you, just ignore her for now. And I'm sorry that happened, but by this time next week, this will be an annoying memory.

Update in Alice-Land: As you know, I'm extremely pregnant, so that's not fun. It's also a million degrees outside, and I feel as if I may just melt. DX That's for the photo comment, I really hope Aiden looks like Jack. :) Umm...I can no longer do pretty much any basic movements such as getting up from the couch without help which makes me want to cry (I actually did yesterday, sad I know :P ). I mean I'm happy he's growing like he should but I'm just so frustrated, you know? Also we've been working on the nursey, it's green :) I'm also moody as fuck, so I'm not entirely sure how he hasn't just ran away yet. And right now, my dog is licking my toes and it tickles plus I really want some peanut butter, which I am eating from the jar with a spoon. :)

Well if someone beat you up I sure as hell do! Just because as of a few days ago I'm eight months pregnant doesn't mean I'm not a bad ass. :)
Hon, try for me ok? I kno w it's hard, and with everyone pushing you it doesn't make it any easier. But you are one strong girl, and you'll get through this. I believe you will :)
So this girlfriend...She good to you? She nice?

What the hell happend? Did someone hit you? Am I going to have to kick someone's ass?
Eating issues how...O.o <---- That's my raised eye brow stern look.
Good for you!!
And yes I completely understand. Hopefully it stays that way. :)

I know, I'm just teasing :) how are you??

*Mary Kay not May.

Oh Em Geee, look at your page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dx I haven't been on in so long Dx I miss you so much Dx <3 e-mail me, call me, txt me. Ask me for something so I can talk to chuu!!!! Dx And happy later birthday (I noticed your age changed)

Katherine hepburn's, May Kay's, and Tony Hawks.

Hiya!!

Lesbian relationships can be a hell of a lot cuter. They also alter any "stereotypical" plotline. Lesbian relationships include a lot of things hetero ones don't. So they end up needing to be treated differently and needing different elements included in the plots.
Well, I live in Louisiana. It's a lot easier to get alcohol when you're underage. But I waited until I turned 21 to start drinking. Mainly because I look really young. (my laser genisis lady told me I looked 12 today haha). I'd definitely tell you to wait. It's more exciting when you get to have your first drink on your 21st birthday. I've smoked weed once and ended up in a situation that I was not originally down for. That's why I don't regularly smoke weed. With alcohol, I handle it better, so I may not be able to type quite as well, but I can express what I want and what I don't want.
And I do mean it. In the future, if you want to be published, I know a lot of ways to find those journals and anthologies that fit you.
One site I would suggest you look at every now and then is lambda literary's site. There is a submission section where LGBT companies publish calls for submissions. It's really cool.

I have an urge to make every Disney tale into a lesbian romance. I don't know why. I've read all the originals for most of Disney's fairytale's, too, but I prefer the happy endings Disney gives for romances. Works better.

Well... boobs are great...
But after what you've been through, I'm happy you have that person that will treat you like a princess. Every girl deserves that. At least, I think so.

And I'm glad you would. I think a lot of people would. It's just a matter of finding the right company.

(don't worry about the "god" thing lol. I don't mind it.)

And I'm glad the comment made you happy. I would have written more but I'm slightly intoxicated because I'm drinking a Four Lokos with the highest alcohol content I could find (which is the highest they make because this state produces that stuff) and I can't concentrate worth a shit. But I really did like it. And I do think you could take your writing to great places. If you ever need help finding journals/magazines/publishing companies to publish your stuff, feel free to come to me. I know a lot about the industry (because I plan on working in it one day).

Absolutely no problem.
I hope it works out, too. If not with this story, I've got an idea for a historical, lesbian romance that could be really good. And a modernized, lesbian version of The Little Mermaid that could be pretty awesome. With mermaids in it. Because I couldn't bring myself to get rid of the mermaids. I also have an idea for a story based on Cinderella. But it's a lot dirtier than the fairytale.
Hahaha well, your girlfriend beat me out for number 1. Well played.

I'm glad you have so much faith in the story lol. If I do get published, I would have to take most, if not all, of the rough draft down from Mibba. Depends on the company. That kind of upsets me. BUT if I publish with Bold Strokes Books (which is the one I really want), I'd be able to keep 25% of the story up and I feel like this site would be a good way to advertise/market.
I'll end up posting the whole thing before I even try to publish it, though. So you'll find out how it ends.

Well, the plot line kind of goes fast from this point on. So we'll see what you, and the rest of the readers, say about it.
Damn, my story can't beat out the girlfriend? Haha no, I totally get it. At least my story is up there with her. That's a serious compliment.
I'm glad you've got someone who can make you smile, though.

Haha I doubt your newer poems are that bad. I'll check out The Light if that's the one you want to look at. I'll warn you, though, I'm terrible at critiquing poems. I'm way better at stories, but I'l give it a shot.

I think it's important too. We're just like the people in the straight community, so why not show that?
I might try when it's finished. The worst they can say is "no," right?

I think that would be perfect. Any poem in particular?
Well, that's the point of the story: to let other girls/women know they're not alone. There are plenty of lesbians who have been through the same thing but we don't say anything because we don't think people will take us seriously (one girl hitting another? It's got to be a girl fight or a pillow fight in other people's minds). People just don't think lesbians can have abusive relationships, same thing with gay men. They're guys, they should be able to fight back. But the fact of the matter is, is that we love our abuser and take it just like a straight woman or man would. And it doesn't matter how old you were or how long you stayed with them. That stuff fucks you up no matter what.
I think the reason I'm afraid to even try publishing this is because of the abusive lesbian relationship featured in it. I know some LGBT publishing companies want to portray the postives of the community. I don't know how featuring an abusive relationship would be taken. Could go really well; could go really bad.

Haha I don't know what points from me gets you, I'll have to come up with something.
My little brother and I used to play them all the time on N64. I used to be a huge LoZ nerd but I stopped playing them when Twilight Princess came out. I guess I didn't like that they allowed the right handed option for Wii players. Link's left handed, they shouldn't have changed it. =[
But yeah, once you beat one, you can figure out the rest. There are always reoccuring elements in those games.
My style is actually a lot like Julia Quinn, a heterosexual historical romance author. Lots of emotion, background that's clearly well thought out (this is debatable on my part), and hints of sex. She's my biggest influence. I wanna be the lesbian version of her.
I'd have to, like, employ you to work on my personal marketing. Haha. You'd get that done better than I would.

10 pts! Haha. Yeah, I thought it was pretty obvious Blake is playing as Link and Saylor is actually playing as Zelda/Sheik (because they're playing SSB Melee; the best game ever). The thing is, most people don't know Sheik is a male. The only game I know that even mentions that alter ego is Ocarina of Time and that was big when N64 was still around. So a lot of my readers wouldn't know who that is, even if they have played SSB Melee. Which is what I was worried about.
And thank you. I'm glad to know people would buy the book if I got it published. Especially since you've already read a lot of it.

Okay hang on gotta get it up.