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  • DramaChic

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    Thanks for the comment on Far From Never :) You're right, the chapter titles are Gaelic. The story really isn't set in future, past, or present; it's more set in an alternate universe/ reality. Thank you for pointing out the change in tenses. I began to notice that myself in current writings, but haven't gone back to fix it in past chapters. I hope that now I can catch myself before doing it again :P
    I'm glad you enjoyed the story :)
    June 28th, 2012 at 03:40am
  • HeartRate

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    Well, what I usually do when making my layouts is look for a wallpaper that really goes with the story like for yours it could be a broken heart or something. Then from there you can base the color scheme off of the picture and so on. This is how I make my layouts, I hoped this helped. :3
    June 28th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • lucymadeley

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    hey, Its okay youre not odd youre really sweet, if you want to talk more i dont know if it might be easier to do it via message (i dont really mind but it might be easier to like keep track of the conversation if you get me)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 02:58am
  • lucymadeley

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    yeah that would be nice, you seem lovely and interesting also :-)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:57am
  • lucymadeley

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    Thank you, you're lovely, i will get round to reading it becuase it sounds interesting and from the other comments it sounds great, i just dont think it would be wise right now, but i will let you know what i think when i read it :-)
    June 23rd, 2012 at 01:07am
  • Jaquie!

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    Thank you for the comment! Haha, not to be egotistical, but I liked that part in my story too ;D I felt super smart.

    Anyway, I'm really glad you enjoyed the piece, it's something I'm really proud of.
    June 21st, 2012 at 11:31pm
  • Chaoss

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    Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it. Mr. Green
    June 19th, 2012 at 12:23am
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    Thanks a lot for your comment on my story Frosty Flight! I really appreciate your feedback.
    June 14th, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • fogbound.

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    Hey! Glad you made one, I can make you a story layout by the way :)
    August 20th, 2011 at 08:46pm