hey agaaaain :) about your comment on the first chapter being forced; i've done my job, then! i wanted a really uncomfortable, uneasy feeling to it. the characters involved dont speak english as a first language (aurore, as english professor, would only respond in english and encouraged her students to practise outside of lessons) so it gave an awkwardness to it that just left a lot of things unsaid, which is kind of a theme for the whole thing... thanks for the comment, though,
July 28th, 2012 at 10:37pm