Jazmyne / Comments

Of course! I can't remember if I ever saw you pop up on there or not but DM me if I didn't follow you back~!

@ pocahontas.
Awwwww thanks!!!

Two years late but I hope you’re well all the same! Doesn’t look like you’re around here much, neither am I, but if you ever come back know that I thought of you!

IG: issitohbi

sklfasd;lf;jadsla!! I know it's about time, I'm so sorry it's been a eternity. I'm so so so happy you liked it. I'm going to start writing the next chapter tonight :DD

Lauren xoxo

JAZ! I MISS YOU TOO OMG I'M ON TUMBLR SOMETIMES BUT I'VE BEEN SO BUSY LATELY MY HEAD IS IN 50 DIFFERENT DIRECTIONS! I apologize for the caps lolol I miss you though! And I'm so happy I'm back on here, I missed writing! If you wanna request anything I'll be happy to write a one shot for you or something, maybe once I can get the new story up an running (:

Jazmyne, thank you so much for the comment! It's really amazing to hear that people are still reading Love Gone Mad. :)

your comment just made my day and now i really want to update that fic, omg thank you i love you

Yeah, exactly. Ha-ha. It just takes time and effort, two things I don't have. :) Hahahaha. But yeah, hopefully, the story will have less plot holes from here on out. :)

I'm glad you like it! And yeah, I figure there are. I mean, we kind of wrote it a long time ago, and we haven't looked at it, editing-wise, since then. We're just starting to write it again after about a year of not. Hahaha. So I would imagine there are errors. We'll have to find a day where we go back and fix crap. Or they might just stay there. :p Thanks for commenting!

...Now I seem stupid for the message I sent you. Hahahaha. But I'm glad you like it, and I'm going to update it as soon as I can find the time. Thanks for commenting!

Gah, everyone says that but I always find myself apologizing to my readers when they have something to say that isn't all positive. I try my best to satisfy and please my readers without changing the content of my story. I know I shouldn't apologize if I'm proud, but I do anyway.

I didn't see the detail as coming off as excessive until a couple of you (readers, I mean) pointed it out. I still don't feel I should change it but maybe ease up a bit on it, especially with going into more dialogue soon. But again, thank you! (:

Also, hi, I'm Faelyn. You can call me Fae.

Thank you for the story comment. (:

As for what you said, yeah. I can understand why you feel that detail in the characters is excessive as I progress. However, I do have a reason for doing that as I don't do it in other stories. Eden is utterly obsessed with Cassie, therefore constantly thinking of everything about her - especially her physical beauty, so when writing in his perspective or to his thoughts, Cassie is his all. The couple all together are highly obsessed with each other, constantly noting every little thing. So yes, repeating details can come off as a little excessive, but you have to understand why because I rarely do that in my stories. It's to put an emphasis into their obsessions and desires for each other. I hope that helped you understand why I do that a little better. I really am sorry if that annoys you, though. I was considering cutting back on it.

CAN YOU GUESS WHO I AM?

You're welcome. ^-^ Thanks! :D
This place seems really cool, I'm gonna try to start writing stories and stuff again. :)

http://stories.mibba.com/read/404754/Id-Draw-You-Smiling/

oh ok. and yea its no problem take you time. my school just got back from break and finals and regents are like literally around the corner so i get it. take your time and good luck lol

Yea of course I posted the third chapter. Why what's up? You didn't start the chapter or I was confused with the comment u left. What notification thing?

You can date him lucky you. Lol. I was on my cousins Facebook and I looked him up and it said he was in a relationship and I saw a picture of the girl and I was so mad cause he was dating and also cause I couldn't even say anything bad about the girl cause she was actually pretty lol. I was like ahhhh no! Lol. Ite seriously sucks that he's not my age. How's the chapter coming?

yea for real!!!!!!! April 22,1985. lol thats how like obsessed i am lol. i can not believe he's 26 years old! how i wish he was 16 years old right now that way I'd have a better chance lol.

AHHHHH IT'S MATT BALLINGER'S BIRTHDAY TODAY!!!!!!