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I figured as much.
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Which is why I thought to ask for a continuation.

You'll love France when you go.
It's the most amazing place in the world.
Especially tomorrow.
And it makes me homesick.

well this next football season i think i am going to go for a team (probably the patriots).
there pretty damn good :]
oh like your profile by the way.

thanks for the add!!!

Yea, true.

1. What do you like about my story? Everything basically. The writing style, the storyline the characters 2. Do you think I could change something to make it better? I don't think so no. 3. What attracted you to the story to begin with? The description it sounded very intresting, as change refreshing if you will top see something with a well written description that didn't mention rockstars going at it. 4. If one thing could happen in the story what would you want it to be? For jordan to Make sure elliot can't get another girl pregnant ever...by kneeing him in the balls so hard he screams like a girl and is taken to hospital (I so haven't done that -shifty eyes-)

There ya' Go!

Yea,

My mom actually tries to talk to me, but I don't talk to her anymore. She's too much into her drugs and shit. I went there this summer and all I could smell was marijuana all day. She'd go in her room and smoke up then go out and party all night. I just decided that she had too much other shit before me and I was sick of it.

My dad actually got married after he won custody of me, so I kinda got two moms. Because the woman my dad married kinda raised me... Now they got a divorce, but I live withmy mom (or step-mom)...

Well.... I started reading it because it's origional fiction. And you're a pure goddess for eciding to write origional instad of that frashy band slash everyone else writes.

And if you could change anything, I 'd say come up with your own personal description of your characters because I noticed that your description of Trenton was Chad Michael Murray...

And thirdly/ The exact same thing happened to me when I was little, except I was jsut a baby. I know exactly where you're coming from . EXACTLY....

Uh. It's really complicated. My dad had to go to court with my mom to get custody of me. It's really time consuming and it has a lot to do with coming up with excuses to why the pther person is an innapropirate caregicer and how your child would be better off with you.. blah blah... stuff like that.:P

Hey.
Thanks for the friend addy. :P
What's up?

yeah, i bought the first one today, cant wait to read it.
let me know if you do a sequel!!

that was brilliant! i'd love for a sequel if thats what you decide. it was really good. i loved the ending. have u heard of that series out, a vampire romance; twilight is the first book.

awwww, wots gonna happen? is he dead? they gonna turn him? that would be sooo kewl...

read the next part of your vamp story! it was class! i can't wait to read the next part! What happens??

no problem!

liked the next part! you're a good writer. can't wait for the next part

yeah, i sometimes have bursts of imagination and other times its writers block. im starting a spinoff from the story im writing now (the one i'd love to get published) to put on here

cool, i like a lot of romance novels with a bit of action in it, and romance with fantasy especially. I'm writing a book at the moment, a fantasy/comedy/ adventure/ romance... but i bet you're a faster writer than me.

well, i dont see why people have to be so immature about something like that, its basically a natural part of life, everyone does it. I like reading romance novels and my friends all tease me in school because of parts like that but i think you're a great writer. Keep it up and don't be put of by those immature ones, can't wait for the next part!

no problem, i've read stuff like that before, and so i'm used to it. i'm not immature and a person to go eww. but i really liked the way you wrote it. cant wait for the next part. I love the characters and tristan dude is growing on me!

just read the next part of your story, the vampire one, it was good.